The Right to Love - Part 15

Nov 09, 2011 17:43

Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love’s Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

Rating: NC-17 for ( Read more... )

fan fic, rating: nc-17, pepa/silvia

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pepsimar November 19 2011, 15:14:38 UTC
I'm a faithful reader,although I usually don't comment. OMG! I can't wait to read more about what's just happened to pepa... that creep Lozano probably contaminated her. Anyway, I love that you are still writing.

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lenageek November 20 2011, 07:36:26 UTC
Hola pepsimar - thanks for continuing to read!

Not sure what happened to Pepa - I'm working on it. ;D No, actually she wasn't contaminated, tho that would have been an interesting twist. I figured she would have collapsed anyway with all the stress and fights I put her through. She'll be back up, kicking ass soon. :D

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girlechick November 21 2011, 18:10:09 UTC
Duuuude! That was awesome! :D
Mmm... Kick ass Pepa...yummy!

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lenageek November 21 2011, 18:45:11 UTC
Hi!! Hola, mi beezer chica! How are ya? How's RL, uni and all that?

Thanks for saying that was awesome - took me long enough to crank that last chapter out. Kick ass Pepa is yummy but action is oh, so damn hard to write! That basically was the part where I was stuck for four months!

More kick ass Pepa and cliffhangers to come - but first the pelirroja has to wake up! :D

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girlechick November 21 2011, 18:52:42 UTC
Hello LG! :D I'm good, thanks for asking. I've graduated and all. Got a job in the art dept of a talent agency.
How's things with you?

Can't wait for the next chapter. :D There better be some smut :p

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lenageek November 21 2011, 20:28:15 UTC
Congrats on graduating and getting a job! Especially in today's economy!

My RL is stressful - I still have a job but my whole department got let go. Now I'm doing the work of five people and have a new boss - totally stressful! But I'm going on vacation this week to see my family - just what I need! :D

Hm, maybe I'll work in some smut. Dunno about the next chapter since the girls are still kinda beat up. ;p

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ext_908298 November 29 2011, 22:00:47 UTC
Dios! You're writings are pure gold, absolutely amazing :D I just discovered PepSi about a month ago and your site few weeks later and now I'm so hooked with this story and also completely in love with this couple! Can't wait for the next part!

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lenageek December 2 2011, 01:32:41 UTC
Hola! Thanks for reading and your lovely comments! Isn't PepSi great? I love that new fans are still discovering this story.

Yup, I gotta get going on that next part! Gracias! :D

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suying87 January 7 2012, 01:13:27 UTC
Hey lenageek! Just to let you know I'm still here with PepSi and following your story although I failed to comment on your last one! My apologies.. Have been really busy with life since grad with new job in new place.. I do keep checking back for your masterpiece!
I really love your story and your style of writing.. I like how Pepa thinks of Silvia before doing anything stupid.. I think it really reflects her love for her..
Well, thank you very much for continuing the story and keep up the good work! Looking forward to seeing a new update soon.. And hope all goes well for you in RL! =)

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lenageek January 9 2012, 20:31:42 UTC
Hey suying87! Thanks for your lovely comment - it gave me a needed shot in the arm to keep going with writing and made my day! Congrats on graduating and the new job and new place!

Pepa's one hell of an impulsive character but I think she's got her love for Silvia that is above all. Although she's not above kicking some serious ass when it's required! I'm glad I'm done with the fight scenes for now since they're really difficult to write.

Working on the new update. Silvia's coming back! Now, how to write it with the right amount of love and not get too maudlin or sentimental is the challenge. But it's a good one! :D

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lenageek May 7 2012, 10:49:48 UTC
Pepa's kick ass, but she's definitely got her moralistic side, as I write her. All the fight went out of her once she saw that Lozano was neutralized and, as she said, she wouldn't want Silvia to see her murdering a suspect in cold blood. But, I was happy to get rid of him once he posed a threat! :p

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