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Dec 23, 2007 20:40

Title: Practice Makes Perfect
Author: kyoto_no_hikari
Genre: It’s not exactly smut, and it’s not exactly crack, either...though, the ending is. :D
Rating: Borderline R. Hey, at least my ratings with these two are going down.
Pairing: Nakajima Yuto/Yamada Ryosuke, and I guess there's some mentions of: random senpai at school/kouhai from nearby junior high, Amakusa ( Read more... )

je, !kyoto-written

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togechan December 24 2007, 05:02:10 UTC
Aren't I special? 8D *reads fic*

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togechan December 24 2007, 05:05:06 UTC
LOL. BUT THEY DON'T KNOW WHY TSUKI IS CORRUPTED. I) MEAN, WE HAVEN'T FINISHED THAT YET! D: Or... YAY FOR INSIDE JOKES? :D

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kyoto_no_hikari December 24 2007, 05:07:13 UTC
XDD YAY FOR INSIDE JOKES AND TIMELINE INCONSISTENCY!

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quinnsan December 24 2007, 16:52:56 UTC
....oh my god. *resists urge to read it over again* xDDD That was...I loved it! *is sooo not coherent enough right now*

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kyoto_no_hikari December 24 2007, 18:13:06 UTC
LOL I'll take that as a compliment. XD ♥

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kyoto_no_hikari December 24 2007, 19:15:32 UTC
Why does my Yamajima always try to be slutty but fail and end up cute? XD

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chiharu December 25 2007, 05:32:34 UTC
I CAN'T BELIEVE I DIDN'T READ THIS WHEN YOU FIRST POSTED IT BECAUSE I WAS SICK IN BED >/ HOW COULD I MISS SUCH ANOTHER BORDERLINE YAMAJIMA PORN?

Yamada stammered, turning red, “N-nothing! Y-you know my mother, c-crazy old lady!”

“But she’s thirty-eight.”

“She’s convinced she’s old.”

fdkasfj YUTO YOU ARE AMAZING PLEASE SAY THIS TO ME WHEN I'M 38 AND YOU'RE ..eh... .35? Damn, Yamada-mama is young.

“Okay…looks like we’re going to have to do some role-playing exercises, then,” Yuto sighed

OK SO I STARTED SPITTING WHEN I READ THIS

As a Johnny, he was used to Yuto randomly kissing him offstage, but this felt a bit different than usual.

... what? WHY HAVE WE MISSED THIS SO FAR? Why is this not on any of the backstage footages? I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU FOR THIS, JOHNNY!

“You’re supposed to be Taiyou, so you’re on bottom.”
skdfjdklsfjdsk;jf;ksdlj TAIYO/HIKARU. WRITE MORE PLZ

“Kami-sama...why could you not have made Ryosuke-chan a girl? I could be having cute little grandchildren right now!”OK SO I KNOW YOU'VE BEEN DYING TO ADD THIS ( ... )

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kyoto_no_hikari December 25 2007, 06:00:10 UTC
Damn, Yamada-mama is young.
I KNOW. >_> She's younger than my mom, and I'm younger than Yamada. XD

OK SO I STARTED SPITTING WHEN I READ THIS
WAS THAT A GOOD THING?

Why is this not on any of the backstage footages?
Because Johnny wants to keep a clean image of his boys. Even though we all know what really goes on there. >_>

TAIYO/HIKARU. WRITE MORE PLZ
THEN GIMME A FREAKIN' PROMPT even though I have a bajillion Taikaru fics I'll never finish and one I'm co-writing right now

OK SO I KNOW YOU'VE BEEN DYING TO ADD THIS LINE IN EVER SINCE THAT YAMAJIMA FIC YOU WROTE IN THE SUMMER XD
YES, YES I HAVE. D:

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thixophobia December 25 2007, 22:30:17 UTC
WHY AM I SO LATE IN REVIEWING THIS? D: -fails-

Borderline R. Hey, at least my ratings with these two are going down.
One day we WILL get you to up it again. BECAUSE YOUR PORN IS NOT BAD DAMN IT D:<

OMG ROLEPLAYING. I knew I would love the fic once I saw that :D

Yama-chan managed to sputter out, “Kyuu’d never do anything like that to Ryuu!”
WELL MAYBE IF HE HAD THE RATINGS WOULD HAVE SKYROCKETED!

As a Johnny, he was used to Yuto randomly kissing him offstage, but this felt a bit different than usual. Besides, Yuto hadn’t done it for a few months now.
... I SAW WE HAVE AN EXPEDITION TO STALK THEM AND TAKE PICTURES OF THESE MOMENTS.

TAIYOU x HIKARU. I. DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY ABOUT THAT. YOU=WIN.

Yuto only gave a short chuckle before placing a hand underneath Yamada’s butt and squeezing. He let out a squeaky yelp, and Yuto wasn’t exactly sure if it were Yamada or him just being in-character. Trapping him in place with his other arm, Yuto gave him a seductive look. “Really…cute.”I GIGGLED AT THIS. Good giggling. Happy ( ... )

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