Fic: Unbidden

[lefaym]

Title: Unbidden
Author: lefaym
Betas: jo02 who took the crappy first draft I sent her and beat it into shape with her MIGHTY SKILLZ, and used_songs who suggested some perfect finishing touches.
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing(s): Lisa/Ianto, Jack/Ianto
Summary: Ianto tries to remember Lisa as she was.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: RTD and the BBC own everything.
Spoilers/

Comments

[criccieth]

I like this - always interesting to see what take we all make on Fragments. Too many people seem to forget that Ianto and Lisa WERE actualy an item - and therefore had a sex life!

also like the hints that Jack isn't his first male experience - the man we see in Fragments is a little too forward for me to believe that!

(and used_songs is great, isn't she?)

[lefaym]

used_songs is indeed wonderful. I'm very lucky to have both her and jo02 as my betas.

also like the hints that Jack isn't his first male experience

I hadn't actually intended that-- but if you feel this story fits in with that interpretation, then all the better!

Thanks for commenting. :)

[51stcenturyfox]

What other reason could there be for anything? Need to feel alive.

This story is amazing. Very complex. And it makes me want to watch Fragments again. Right now.

[lefaym]

I'm glad you liked it. And Fragments can never be watched too many times.

[iamshadow]

Raw and painful while also being incredibly hot. I like how it touches on the idea of when infidelity really begins.

[lefaym]

Thank you.

[cherry_soup888]

That was angsty and hot and really good, thanks.

[lefaym]

Glad you liked it-- thanks for commenting.

[andreth47]

What a great fic. Very poignant, very simple idea, and very beautifully executed.

Sincere kudos to your mad writing skillz!

[lefaym]

Thank you-- very glad that you enjoyed it!