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Ficlet: Breaking Point

Aug 20, 2010 14:49

Title: Breaking Point
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myfic, peter/neal, myfic: 500 beta, kink-bingo, white collar

Comments 25

pocky_slash August 20 2010, 05:01:46 UTC

Oh, I just want to wrap Neal up in a blanket and make him cocoa ♥

And Peter is just... too much. WHY IS PETER THE GREATEST DUDE EVER? Ugh, my love for him is so epic. This was awesome. Thank you for sharing :)

lefaym August 20 2010, 05:07:54 UTC

Heee, Neal tends to have that effect on people. :P And you're quite right, Peter is the greatest. :)

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you! ♥

sahiya August 20 2010, 05:22:28 UTC

Very nice post-ep. I know why they had Mozzi listen to the tape with Neal, but I did wish Peter could be there for him. This was just what I wanted to read.

lefaym August 20 2010, 05:24:46 UTC

Thank you! I did feel a bit bad for leaving Mozzie out of this, but... well, Neal needed his Peter! :)

china_shop August 20 2010, 06:13:13 UTC

Ohhhhh, this is wonderful! All forbidden and achy and hot!

lefaym August 20 2010, 06:14:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoy the forbidden hotness! :D

ladygray99 August 20 2010, 06:21:42 UTC

Oh if only we could get this on screen but I don't think the USA people love us enough.

lefaym August 20 2010, 06:28:15 UTC

It would be grand, wouldn't it? :) I do think the writers of the show love us quite a bit though -- Neal and Peter were DEFINITELY flirting in that last episode. :D

Thank you for commenting!

daria234 August 20 2010, 07:22:59 UTC

This was great - I love Neal knowing that he's taking advantage and not caring since he needs it.

lefaym August 20 2010, 07:27:54 UTC

Thank you! I actually felt it was important for Neal to be taking advantage here, simply because I think it sort of cancels out the power differential between them.