Ficlet: Breaking Point

[lefaym]

Title: Breaking Point
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Comments

[neifile7]

That was very nicely visualized. :) Atmosphere of hot transgression, we haz it! And Neal is the very essence of "pushy bottom." It works for his cons and it works when he's sincere, too.

[lefaym]

Thank you! I'm glad that all of those things came across -- that's exactly what I was going for. :)

[sonia6349]

When I leave my bunk, I will tell you how wonderful this story is. Poor Neal. Peter will make it better *sigh*

[lefaym]

Hahaha, thank you! :)

And Peter always makes it better. With his cock. *nods*

[adina_atl]

Neal and Peter--the irresistable force and the immovable object. Obviously we know which one won this time. *g*

This is beautiful and more than a little painful.

[lefaym]

Thank you! Of course, neither of them are totally irressistable or immovable... but they almost are. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[jrosemary]

Gorgeous--my heart was bleeding for both Neal and Peter here! I'm glad they both grabbed as much comfort as they could and glad that it seemed to be enough . . . for the moment, at least.

[lefaym]

Thank you. I think it's easier for Peter since he has El, and also isn't dealing with his ex's death. But, yeah... ultimately not easy for any of them.

[jrosemary]

Oh, I agree. And I got the sense that part of the reason Peter let things go as far as they did was because he knew how badly Neal needed comfort in the form of intimacy from him.

[blaidd_drwg]

*sniffles* I loved this.

[lefaym]

Thank you!