A big thanks to Xikum who worked so hard to fix the wrongs and add the extra bits that make this work so well.
Also thank you
tootiredtosleep and someone Anonymous for their virtual birthday gifts! I squealed happy sounds *blushes*
Snarry anyone?
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2nd half of Chapter 84 )
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Great chappie.
I really hope you show Neville (and the others) 'seeing' Sev. I'd really like to see their reactions once they regain conciousness.
I hope you're not ending this with the end of Voldie, at least not right after. I'd like to see Harry and Sev able to have something of a normal life. Maybe able to go for a walk in public without the aid of invisibility or transfiguration liquids.
A thought occured to me the other day... any chance of Harry running into Nott? Just in Hogsmede or sommat. I'd like to see Nott's reaction to Harry's physical development since leaving school. Plus, Harry really hasn't had to deal with him since the incident. Maybe a type of closure thing? (Like using Nott's fist to hit himself in the head, while Harry keeps saying 'quit hitting yourself. why do you keep hitting yourself?' or an Atomic Wedgie).
Just a thought. :)
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The part with the article was very amusing! And I loved how the Death Eater destroyed the Dark Lord's plan, unintentionally...
Loved the end of the chapter. It was a particularly hot scene, and included one of my fav. kinks. Just thinking of it, brings a wicked grin to my face. :)
I so enjoyed this moment(!):
"If you paid any attention to the class on healing balms, you would know this particular potion works best from the inside," Severus lied smoothly and sounded so much like his teacher self Harry almost snorted in laughter.
oh, and I noticed you got nominated for best WIP over at http://quilltoparchment.com/vote.html, congrats for that, and I hope every one here votes for you, I sure did :)
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