First time writing Makoto so be nice about it, kay? Constructive crit is more than welcome. I want to do this girl justice. :D

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[The Audio feed kicks in with a loud crash. Makoto just hit a wall.]

O-ow! That really hurt. Man, I gotta start planning better or--

[Oh. Hey. She sees that journal recording her words. The girl groans and picks the book up.]

If anyone heard that, I'm fine. I just... tripped. [Liar. Cue nervous laugh.] But I'm okay!

[Convinced that she now sounds ( Read more... )

[There's a thud as the book hits the ground, the recording kicking into play without Makoto even realizing. Besides, she's too busy freaking out ( Read more... )