FIC: Captive

Apr 03, 2006 11:33

Title: Captive
Author: lddurham
Beta: deathangelgw
Rating: ADULT NC-17
Challenge Scenario: 2) The 5 scenes are set in 5 different years. Each scene must be 500 words or less.
Summary: Lucius receives a visitor.
Warnings/Spoilers: Post-war, sexual situations. No spoilers.

This was an entry in the "5" challenge at the Lucius/Harry Yahoo group Beneath_Me. They are also ( Read more... )

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txrabbit April 4 2006, 01:59:54 UTC
Wow.

That is truly all I can say. Seeing the development of the relationship, seeing the dominance and submission, it was simply incredible. I have not read Lucius/Harry before. I have attempted, but never succeeded. I am glad I read this, and I am glad you shared such a lovely image.

(You write the best D/s fic! Will we be seeing our Indago boys again?)

Thank you.

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lddurham April 4 2006, 02:45:06 UTC
*blush* Ah, thank you! Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Inadgo... They are definitely being written as we speak. Promise!

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ambersnake April 4 2006, 20:13:38 UTC
Waah, you killed Draco!

Other than that, great work as usual. You have really started to work this whole H/L angle, and it reads very well. I like the slow progress of the relationship, and how Harry bit by bit gives into Lucius.

Still, I'm very glad you haven't forgotten good ol' H/D :) We're all anxiously waiting to hear how the boys and their daughter are fairing. That said, keep on trying new things. Fics like this'll keep us happy for a long time.

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lddurham April 5 2006, 00:16:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Th eprogression of their relationship was super imortant to me, cause I don't think there is a more unlikely pairing that these two. Honestly. That's why this was a huge challenge for me. That and the 500 word limit per section! *shudders* That nearly killed me!

Thank you again for reading!

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darsied April 6 2006, 23:44:19 UTC
This is definantly my favortie pairing besides H/D! Such a sweet ending. I understand guys!!!

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lddurham April 7 2006, 04:00:52 UTC
*big smile*

Thank you, I'm glad you liked the ending!

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