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lazulisong

[arashi] [aibajun] the first five times [6/?]

Feb 01, 2008 19:23

TITLE: The First Five Times
PAIRING: Arashi, AibaJun, Ohmiya secondary
DISCLAIMER: Not mine. Oh god, not mine.
RATING: R because I freaking made Matsujun a freaking hooker you guys. Please note that the rating is mostly because of the language so far, and will probably continue that way. It's actually more of a screwball comedy .... about hookers. ( Read more... )

horrible things i've done to matsujun, aibajun, the first five times, arashi

Comments 43

honooko February 2 2008, 03:33:36 UTC

*happy sigh* Nothing ends a day well like a good AU. ♥

lazulisong February 2 2008, 03:34:40 UTC

WHERE ARE MY COOKIES

I WANT COOKIES

honooko February 2 2008, 03:35:51 UTC

TALK TO ME WHEN I'M NOT PUNCHING MYSELF IN THE FACE FOR AGREEING TO CYBERPUNK.

lazulisong February 2 2008, 03:36:51 UTC

w-we can give each other cookies maybe? ._.

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uminohikari February 2 2008, 03:49:37 UTC

*violently heartmarks*

I absolutely adored:
Artery Deathpit (and fluffernutters, acutally, that sounds like a really good sandwich>>)
You will bring me a receipt and it will have both tofu and vegetables on it!
That is so awesome on so many levels. ♥!
...Mattsun. Mattsun My life is complete.
PLATYPUS. I did not know it was possible to include a reference to platypi, and make it sound reasonable. *.*. Also, pufferfish was also a word that seemed impossible until you did so. *.*
"MATSUMOTO JUN," said Sho, like the wrath of God, and Nino prudently blockaded himself and Ohno behind a wall of pillows.
THE WRATH OF GOD. WALL OF PILLOWS. That line will never stop being awesome.

lazulisong February 2 2008, 04:21:32 UTC

they are supertasty but they're also very, very bad for you. T3T And I've always been of the strong opinion they sound like something from a Special Movie.

hungry_worm February 2 2008, 04:02:00 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ A++!!

Jun trying to get rid of a hyper, tired Aiba who's resembling a five year old after a day on the playground without his nap was a beautiful image. XD

"You come over here right now and take him to eat something healthy!" said Jun with barely suppressed emotion. "You will bring me a receipt and it will have both tofu and vegetables on it! You will eat with him, do you hear me!"

XDD Poor, desperate Jun! His pain amuses me so.

This chapter started out so lighthearted and amusing, that the turn to the sudden tension felt even chillier.

"Your place, actually," said Sho. "Jun, is something wrong?"

"Not yet," said Jun, and took the last few steps into the main street nearly at a run.

I love the scene with alerted Sho and Jun being uneasy and fleeing from the small street. *______* Talk about high tension.

I also love the returning scene, how nothing happened after all, and how everyone's waiting for him, worrying. Nino especially, I like how Jun observes how, while faking to be focussed on his game, "he wasn't paying a ( ... )

hungry_worm February 2 2008, 04:20:54 UTC

After reading it again, I can't help but be incredibly amused by Aiba's teflon-like resistance to Jun's glares. Aiba just seems to slip underneath all barriers that Jun perfected over the years, and it's simply beautiful. Aiba cares, and Jun can't handle it properly. So sweet. XD

omnipresentdmat February 2 2008, 04:05:22 UTC

Oh, I am loving this AU so much. Thank you for being an awesome, wonderful, awesome, talented author. I died a little when I saw that it was updated.

tenshi_angels87 February 2 2008, 04:22:46 UTC

i'm in luv to !!!!!!!

i would give you hearts but donno how to do it on my notebook .....sorrrryyy *.*

i can't wait until v-day now *squeaks*