TITLE: The First Five Times
PAIRING: Arashi, AibaJun, Ohmiya secondary
DISCLAIMER: Not mine. Oh god, not mine.
RATING: R because I freaking made Matsujun a freaking hooker you guys. Please note that the rating is mostly because of the language so far, and will probably continue that way. It's actually more of a screwball comedy .... about hookers.
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I WANT COOKIES
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I absolutely adored:
Artery Deathpit (and fluffernutters, acutally, that sounds like a really good sandwich>>)
You will bring me a receipt and it will have both tofu and vegetables on it!
That is so awesome on so many levels. ♥!
...Mattsun. Mattsun My life is complete.
PLATYPUS. I did not know it was possible to include a reference to platypi, and make it sound reasonable. *.*. Also, pufferfish was also a word that seemed impossible until you did so. *.*
"MATSUMOTO JUN," said Sho, like the wrath of God, and Nino prudently blockaded himself and Ohno behind a wall of pillows.
THE WRATH OF GOD. WALL OF PILLOWS. That line will never stop being awesome.
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Jun trying to get rid of a hyper, tired Aiba who's resembling a five year old after a day on the playground without his nap was a beautiful image. XD
"You come over here right now and take him to eat something healthy!" said Jun with barely suppressed emotion. "You will bring me a receipt and it will have both tofu and vegetables on it! You will eat with him, do you hear me!"
XDD Poor, desperate Jun! His pain amuses me so.
This chapter started out so lighthearted and amusing, that the turn to the sudden tension felt even chillier.
"Your place, actually," said Sho. "Jun, is something wrong?"
"Not yet," said Jun, and took the last few steps into the main street nearly at a run.
I love the scene with alerted Sho and Jun being uneasy and fleeing from the small street. *______* Talk about high tension.
I also love the returning scene, how nothing happened after all, and how everyone's waiting for him, worrying. Nino especially, I like how Jun observes how, while faking to be focussed on his game, "he wasn't paying a ( ... )
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i would give you hearts but donno how to do it on my notebook .....sorrrryyy *.*
i can't wait until v-day now *squeaks*
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