A Dance

[lazerbug2006]

The whole ride home I can't bare to not feel her-somehow.

She looks at me from the passenger seat, her eyes etching into my skin.

She is mine, always. Simple.

As the car comes to a stop, I look over at her-

My wife, my soulmate, my forever.

A smile forms on my face and suddenly I feel those familiar butterflies.

"Do you trust me Jenny?"

"Well I would hope

Comments

[hpeek04]

*sigh* Love it, especially Emma taking Jenny back to where they first began :) Great update!!! More??? Please?

[lazerbug2006]

Thank you kindly :) Possibily....

[anonymous]

Owwww, I really like this chap with the "back in time" moments, hope there will be more....!!!

[lazerbug2006]

Thank you :)

BRAVO

[anonymous]

Eh nice work.
I love it.
More strongly

Re: BRAVO

[lazerbug2006]

Thank you kindly :) Glad you enjoyed it!

[jamster74]

Oh I love it !! This is soo good! I love how Emma takes Jenny back to where it all began. Very good! Please continue :) I enjoyed it!

[lazerbug2006]

Thank you :)

[partoetorno]

So, we have to wait to read something about you....but it was worth...this is really, really, really beautiful.
So tender, so lovely, so caring, so poetic....
It is like a slow and gentle dance inside their life. Nad their love.

Thank you so much for writing this, it really touched my old heart. So much.

A kiss.

[lazerbug2006]

Thank you for your lovely comment, made me :) Glad you enjoyed reading~