Comments | lavvyan: Male Enhancement 9B/10

lavvyan

Mar 05, 2010 20:49

It's still Friday. ;)

In which John is not an android, but just as much time has gone by.

( Previous parts)

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( John isn't the man he used to be. )

Comments 59

anyanka_eg March 5 2010, 21:16:35 UTC

Lovely. I don't know what to do about the next part. I know that I like a happily ever after but I want to know the end. Oh, the dilemma.

lavvyan March 12 2010, 18:40:48 UTC

You'll have some time yet to decide. *snuggles*

almostnever March 5 2010, 21:37:16 UTC

Nawwww. Twenty years' experience. ♥

lavvyan March 5 2010, 21:42:55 UTC

Oh. There's supposed to be an apostrophe there, huh? *sneaks off to edit*

♥

pionie March 5 2010, 21:58:47 UTC

I loved both parts of 9 and yes, I love me a happily ever after, but I am tantalised, and will probably read on anyway....

lavvyan March 12 2010, 18:41:13 UTC

Thank you, and thanks again!

Just don't say I didn't warn ya.

lillyjk March 5 2010, 22:00:07 UTC

Love it - the listing of how they are falling apart was hilarious. And I'll bet John sounds like a braying donkey when he laughs

lavvyan March 12 2010, 18:41:35 UTC

He totally does. *g*

Thank you for your comments, love!

danceswithgary March 5 2010, 22:51:04 UTC

Thanks so much for a lovely ending! (although I'll probably cave and read the 'real' ending too. :-D

lavvyan March 12 2010, 18:42:03 UTC

Thank you for your comment (and don't blame me if you don't like it)! :>