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Fic: One Little White Lie (12/12 + Epilogue)

Feb 25, 2010 00:25

Title: One Little White Lie (12/12)
Author: laughter_now
Rating: strong PG-13 (lots of bad words), tending towards R later
Pairing: Jim/Bones
Disclaimer: I don't own anything related to the Star Trek Franchise. *sigh* Sadly.
Summary: One little white lie never hurt anybody, that's what they say. But apparently they are wrong, because even one small lie ( Read more... )

rating: r, fanfic, fic: one little white lie, star trek xi, kirk/mccoy, slash

Comments 9

dr_harbinger February 25 2010, 04:14:48 UTC

Awesome work! I loved it! It connected well, had plenty of detail. The ending was nice too.

snowinginjune February 25 2010, 06:14:56 UTC

my god, im sooooo tired right now, but i still reads it, cause ive been waiting dying and so so so wanting to know what would happen

sighs happily~~~

i am satisfied!

eringobraugh007 July 27 2010, 23:27:42 UTC

Can't believe I read it all in one go!

I really enjoyed this story - you definitely know how to get the reader involved with what the characters are going through.

Nice!

jachelle0627 December 17 2010, 07:54:11 UTC

I absolutely love this story - every single word. There are so many scenes that resonate still in my mind - Rash'Tar reading Jim's mind and finding something there that even Jim was not consciously aware of - Bones remembering Jim's bloody shirt from the shuttle ride where they met - Jim helping Bones deal with the aftermath after he remembered he had ended his father's life.

My favorite line...
Jim reached for Bones' free hand, the one that wasn't holding the PADD, and before the other man even had the chance to pull away from his touch, he put both rings into his open palm. Closing Bones' fingers over the warm metal, Jim could only hope that Bones would understand that this wasn't just about the rings. Jim wasn't only giving him those; he was also giving Bones his heart for safekeeping.

This was a beautiful story from start to finish.

laughter_now December 17 2010, 19:38:24 UTC

Thank you so much!

I'm really thrilled that you enjoyed the story so much. It's been a while ago already, but I enjoyed writing it very much.
And to tell you the truth, that line you quoted is one of my favourite lines in the story, too. :D

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment!

desds December 11 2011, 06:09:48 UTC

Amazing fic! Absolutely loved it!

laughter_now December 11 2011, 10:41:03 UTC

Thank you so much!