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Fic: Do I Love You So Much That I'm Willing To Let You Go

Jan 05, 2010 21:38

Title: Do I love you so much that I'm willing to let you go?
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Kirk/McCoy; with cameos by assorted other crewmembers
Warnings: Explicit sex (see rating), but no kinks
Author's Notes:
Disclaimer: I don't own anything associated with Star Trek. Really. I promise. I don't own any of the lyrics or graphics either.
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fanfic, st_santa, star trek xi, rating: nc-17, kirk/mccoy, fic: do i love you so much, slash

Comments 65

shadowakiyah January 5 2010, 21:09:06 UTC

Oh. Just, oh. This is beautiful, and I'm completely and utterly glowing with delight that it was a happy ending. You certainly have a way with angst, and with extremely hot, extremely emotional involved sex. I am literally going to be repeating myself, but this is really beautiful. I could feel the tension and the emotion all the way through, from Jim's desperation to Bones frustration with Jim just not getting what he was saying, and the sex! God the sex was just tender and lovely and beautiful and right.

This one's going in my memories.

Absolutely, wonderfully, heartbreakingly, beautiful.

laughter_now January 5 2010, 21:54:59 UTC

Wow, thank you so much!
This story really just wrote itself once it got started, and it was so much fun writing it. So I'm absolutely thrilled that you liked it so much. I'm floored, really. And humbled. Thank you.

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laughter_now January 5 2010, 21:53:25 UTC

Thanks! It was really the only alternative that Jim is working himself into a real state about things Bones didn't even seriously consider. Glad it worked out for you. Thanks a lot.

roseandheather January 5 2010, 21:33:41 UTC

*is some sort of weird glowy thing that is probably freaking the cats out*

laughter_now January 5 2010, 21:52:08 UTC

Lol, I'd really, REALLY love to see that. :D Glad you enjoyed it, thanks.

thenefarius January 5 2010, 21:37:35 UTC

Very, very enjoyable reading, thank you for writing it! :)

laughter_now January 5 2010, 21:51:46 UTC

Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to leave a comment. :D

sangueuk January 5 2010, 21:58:13 UTC

Oh I loved this so much! I was in agony right with Jim - you did a brilliant job of building the tension.

I'll be recc'ing this!

Also, the final scene - the best orgasm descriptions ever! Fantastic, thank you!

laughter_now January 5 2010, 22:07:07 UTC

Gosh, thank you so much! I'm really thrilled that you enjoyed it - and trust me, that's definitely the first compliment I've been given for my orgasm descriptions. That's one to remember.
And the thought of recc'ing makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Thanks!