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FIC, FIC, FIC!!! (Inception) (Part 3)

Nov 14, 2012 16:51

Title: Cut-out Cookies (Part 3/3)
Author: Lauand
Beta: Avierra
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 14.800
Summary: Einstein was right. Arthur was wrong.
A/N: My deepest thanks to avierra for the help (once again). Concrit welcome.

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Comments 19

eva667 November 14 2012, 18:31:30 UTC

This was lovely, and it's not a criticism but I loved the dialog between Arthur and Eames and would have loved to see more of it.
Am now off to read more of your fics :-)

lauand November 15 2012, 14:09:42 UTC

Thank you!

In fact, I'm usually quite more centered in dialogs because that's the part I enjoy writing the most, but for some reason this fandom drags me to introspection. Hope to be able to focus on more direct interaction in the next fic!

Ha, ha, you're going to end very soon, I'm quite new to the fandom (I'm always late to the party, dammit!).

anonymous November 15 2012, 07:39:23 UTC

Loved this! Loved the repeated motifs throughout, and the language, and the two sad idiots who, despite it all, are a perfect match!

joyouslee@dw

lauand November 15 2012, 14:06:10 UTC

Thank you!

Ha, ha, they really are!

anonymous November 15 2012, 23:35:29 UTC

Ahh Arthur, you jerk. You can never get away from Eames!

They're so perfect for each other in this, like fire and air :)

lauand November 16 2012, 15:15:00 UTC

Oh, I had never heard this "fire and air" analogy! It's beautiful! And yes, I totally agree, they're perfect for each other! :D

writteninsable November 16 2012, 05:28:41 UTC

I quite liked this - you had some really great lines in there and the repetition was effective without getting irritating. The only real crit I'd offer at this point would be to watch for typos. The whole feel of the piece, though, was great. The dialogue was lovely and the ending was just perfect. :) I look forward to seeing move of your work.

lauand November 16 2012, 15:19:58 UTC

Oh, I was a bit worried about repetitions being a little annoying sometimes. I'm glad you didn't find them so. Sorry for the typos!!

Thank you very much for your words, I'm really glad you liked it!! :D

sally_fw November 16 2012, 20:57:16 UTC

This was gorgeous, I loved it so much! I love your writing style! <3

lauand November 16 2012, 21:32:13 UTC

Thank you so much!! :D

(Is that an Oglaf icon? I do adore that comic!)

sally_fw November 18 2012, 19:17:08 UTC

Yes, I love Oglaf too! <3