Making Memories Of Us - Ch 7 - Holding On

Mar 20, 2008 01:44

Rating: R
Disclaimer: See first chapter
Pairing: Cain/DG
Note: Nobody dies despite the quote!
Previous Chapters: Ch 1 - Aftermath; Ch 2 - Whispers Of A Legend; Ch 3 - Stretched To The Limits; Ch 4 - Cariad; Ch 5 - Puzzle Pieces; Ch 6 - Falling Into Place

Making Memories Of Us

by

Lattelady

Ch 7 - Holding On

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cain/dg, tin man, making memories of us

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Always love your fics... obsidianagirl March 20 2008, 10:41:33 UTC
Especially your DG/TinMan fics...Wonderfully sweet and I love the whole chapter. Wyatt can is such a gentleman and I love the fact her toes were giving him the wibblies.

Perfectly written to give us two sides of the same feelings and I have to say it was a warm sentimental piece interspersed with some hotness inducing moments.

I really can't wait for more...

Sid

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And one more thing... obsidianagirl March 20 2008, 10:45:19 UTC
Wyatt teaching Deeg to use his weapon was the hotest of the hot moments.

Yeap, I reread that part and it was sexy and a tad romantic even though it was an emotionally charged moment for other reasons.

Sid

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Re: And one more thing... lattelady6 March 20 2008, 15:06:58 UTC
I had to be careful when she was learning about his weapon. I guess I dated a Marine too long...the old this is my weapon, this is my gun thing has stuck. I didn't want it to be a simple pun, I was hoping for the romance.

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Re: Always love your fics... lattelady6 March 20 2008, 15:04:32 UTC
I'm loving writing Tin Man. I haven't had this much fun in a fandom since my Rayne days. I had so much fun writing the fist few pages. They were meant to be funny as well as point to a different in custom

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neefalco March 20 2008, 13:46:17 UTC
“Do you have a foot fetish or something?”

hehe, i was wondering the same thing!

absolutely love this story and this chapter. i was so excited when i saw it was updated over on ff.net this morning.

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lattelady6 March 20 2008, 15:17:34 UTC
Nope, not a foot fetish...but he is attracted to the idea of what is considered sin in his world.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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...but he is attracted to the idea... obsidianagirl March 20 2008, 23:48:44 UTC
Yeap, and that is why it works so well for such an honorable guy...Sometimes it is the simple things that can be concidered 'bad' that make a character more real. Wyatt is gonna have to break and I hope it is soon.

I love when he flops his head back and stares at the cieling of the cave wondering if she was trying to kill him...And then the toes start a whole stream of consciousness thing that made him so angry he could spit.

I love this and am hoping for the next part soon...I love this fic and look forward every day for another part.

I check my inbox for updates every morning before work and love to find the next chapter of this fic.

Sid

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Re: ...but he is attracted to the idea... lattelady6 March 21 2008, 00:04:06 UTC
I LOVE you icon! How do you make them move?

This whole polish bit and what is correct in the OZ is kind of like I am. On the outside I'm thought of as prim and proper...but well lets just say there is another me under there. Most people never met her. I think it is all the more suprising because it is unexpected... That's not why I do it, but I've very comfortible with both parts of me.

That's what I'm going for here and I've used the difference in customs to make it happen

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magickboxgirl March 20 2008, 17:22:20 UTC
Great Chapter. There is just so much I love about this chapter I dont know where to start. Keep up the great work.

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lattelady6 March 20 2008, 18:35:09 UTC
Thank you very much. It was a fun chapter to write. I kept giggling at Cain and I don't usually do that.

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erinm_4600 June 9 2008, 17:36:41 UTC
Can you spare Cain to teach me how to shoot a gun?

*fans self*
*may have to go outside into the Florida heat to cool down*

WOOF.

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lattelady6 June 9 2008, 21:10:42 UTC
Sure thing. I'm sure DG will lone him out for that anytime.

Wow, I got the CPR icon, I must be doing something right.

What part of Florida? I lived in Sarasota for eight years. Loved everything there but the huge bugs.

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erinm_4600 June 9 2008, 22:25:38 UTC
live in Orlando, work in DeLand.

Funny sotry, I just finished working on our Manatee County map.

Well, it's not THAT funny... but I am on a droll-roll today ;)

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