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Making Memories Of Us - Ch 7 - Holding On

Mar 20, 2008 01:44

Rating: R
Disclaimer: See first chapter
Pairing: Cain/DG
Note: Nobody dies despite the quote!
Previous Chapters: Ch 1 - Aftermath; Ch 2 - Whispers Of A Legend; Ch 3 - Stretched To The Limits; Ch 4 - Cariad; Ch 5 - Puzzle Pieces; Ch 6 - Falling Into Place

Making Memories Of Us

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Lattelady

Ch 7 - Holding On

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cain/dg, tin man, making memories of us

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neefalco March 20 2008, 13:46:17 UTC

“Do you have a foot fetish or something?”

hehe, i was wondering the same thing!

absolutely love this story and this chapter. i was so excited when i saw it was updated over on ff.net this morning.

lattelady6 March 20 2008, 15:17:34 UTC

Nope, not a foot fetish...but he is attracted to the idea of what is considered sin in his world.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

...but he is attracted to the idea... obsidianagirl March 20 2008, 23:48:44 UTC

Yeap, and that is why it works so well for such an honorable guy...Sometimes it is the simple things that can be concidered 'bad' that make a character more real. Wyatt is gonna have to break and I hope it is soon.

I love when he flops his head back and stares at the cieling of the cave wondering if she was trying to kill him...And then the toes start a whole stream of consciousness thing that made him so angry he could spit.

I love this and am hoping for the next part soon...I love this fic and look forward every day for another part.

I check my inbox for updates every morning before work and love to find the next chapter of this fic.

Sid

Re: ...but he is attracted to the idea... lattelady6 March 21 2008, 00:04:06 UTC

I LOVE you icon! How do you make them move?

This whole polish bit and what is correct in the OZ is kind of like I am. On the outside I'm thought of as prim and proper...but well lets just say there is another me under there. Most people never met her. I think it is all the more suprising because it is unexpected... That's not why I do it, but I've very comfortible with both parts of me.

That's what I'm going for here and I've used the difference in customs to make it happen

Re: ...but he is attracted to the idea... obsidianagirl March 21 2008, 00:21:38 UTC

I wish I knew how to make them move...I stole that from someone more clever than I am. So, sorry.

Yeah, I am prim and proper except when I write. You can ask my friend gwenfrewi72 she'll tell you I sound like a prude on the phone when we hammer out fic ideas.

She couldn't believe I was the same woman that wrote, She'll Burn or Sharin'...Which was a Chocolate Covered Naked Mal Fic (both Mal/River fics), mostly because I was stammering and hmmming and hawing as we discussed a particularly sexy Mal/River fic idea over the phone.

I completely understand the duality...It is the same for me...

Sid

Re: And one more thing... obsidianagirl March 20 2008, 23:40:04 UTC

You hit the bull's eye...It was romantic and sweet. And yeah, I am married to a military man so I got the pun, but found it romantic and a little sad...Deeg really doesn't want somethin' to happen to him anymore than Wyatt wants anything to happen to her.

Lovely writing...I swear!

Sid

Re: And one more thing... lattelady6 March 21 2008, 00:06:25 UTC

Thank you, this is about the best review I've gotten on this chapter. I'm not sure it was recieved in the way I wrote it...oh well. I had fun.

Yeah the gun, weapon thing about drove me nuts. I find when write I almost never call a weapon a gun unless the person using the word isn't familiar with arms....not that I am...but given my history...I know the jargon.

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