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Doublemeat Palace Challenge

Apr 04, 2007 16:24

Buffy drabble by Slaymesoftly
100 words
Rated G

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drabble, doublemeat palace, fic challenge, season 6, fic

Comments 8

petzipellepingo April 4 2007, 21:11:20 UTC

She wasn’t too good. Not too good for anything. Heaven had rejected her. If that didn’t prove how unworthy she was, then craving sex with an evil, unsouled vampire certainly did.
"sigh" So very much Season Six.

slaymesoftly April 4 2007, 21:14:58 UTC

Alas. :( Thanks for reading.

elisi April 4 2007, 21:32:47 UTC

Aw my poor Buffy - and my poor Spike! *hugs them both* What a lovely and heart breaking snapshot.

Oh - and this: lying, trembling

Did you mean 'laying'?

slaymesoftly April 4 2007, 22:00:29 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.

Looked it up again (because I did waver when I wrote it) and "lying" beneath the anger would seem to be the way to go. Thanks for commenting, though. It's not like I don't screw up sometimes. :)

untitleddemo April 5 2007, 02:07:47 UTC

My heart just breaks for both of them. Well done!

slaymesoftly April 5 2007, 02:36:52 UTC

Thanks!

xheartrockx April 6 2007, 04:49:10 UTC

What can I say that the other haven't said already?

Really heartbreaking, just like the series *dwells in the memories* Really, really enjoyed it. :D

slaymesoftly April 6 2007, 15:27:09 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad it worked for you.