Shattered update....kind of...

[erikssiren]

Hello all! So I have an "Shattered" update to share with you. :D The other day I had decided to see if I could spend the entire day without going online/using my computer. So, I had to write my fic in a notebook and I thought it would be fun to share with you what I wrote using scans of my notebook

Comments

[sripley]

1. YOUR MUSIC CHOICE IS MADE OF WIN. i'm anti-glee and even i have been listening to it nonstop for daaaays xD

2. the comments! love it <3 i write chapters in my notebook a lot, too xD so this was fun to see someone else's writing and all the crossed out stuff and what not hehe.
i love it. <3 kyle/luke conversations are fantastic, and i love the way this scene plays out.
shattered is quite possibly my favorite big bang fic, so i definitely enjoyed this immensely.
can't wait for more! <3

[erikssiren]

DARREN CRISS HAS TAKEN OVER MY LIFE. Seriously, I have never listened to one song so much in my entire existence. It's just so catchy and pretty and..guh.

I love writing my fics by hand, there's just something so organic and freeing and my ideas just flow better. The sad thing is, all that editing was just as I was writing. It's ten times worse when I go back through the story a few times, lol.

I'm so glad you like the fic (and the scene! I watched a bunch of Kish clips to get his voice right but I was still worried). I've been kind of hard on myself with this fic as a whole so it's so nice to hear that it's your favorite! Thank you!

[ariadne83]

This is so neat! That last line is very ominous and I like it!

I write by hand a lot too. Like you, I find my ideas flow better that way :D

[erikssiren]

Thank you!

[murgy31]

I really enjoyed That! This story is so great!

[erikssiren]

Thanks!

[ltklo]

I'm glad you haven't given up on this story.

I loved this.
seeing him with my family, looking like he belongs there

[erikssiren]

I will never give up on this story! I just got sidetracked by other things *coughGleecough* I'm hoping to at least get the fourth chapter up if not have the fifth chapter edited as well tonight.

Thank you!

[alissablue]

I was just thinking about this story the other day =)!

"I don't mind the chase," Reid answered after a moment of tense silence.

Slowly, Luke lowered his eyes and caught Reid's heated gaze with his own. "I'm a fast runner," he returned breathlessly.
THIS right here is my favorite part<3.

Great kind of/sort of update!

[erikssiren]

Thank you! That's probably my favorite part too. :D