A better way to describe it...

[lastingdreams8]

I wrote a song the other day (Falling) about how I felt for someone, which in my humble opinion, did not turn out as planned. Therefore, I made something more suitable, less forced to become a song, and thus a poem:
No Name Thus Far-Feelings?If I ever lost my way getting back to you

Comments

[chris4short]

*sigh* This is like chocolate - so fine, and rich and smooth... the thing you just let melt. Love they way the words are perfectly placed and arranged and in the end, even so you like them, you are ready to just have them as friends.

I must admit the last two lines cracked my up - the whole thing is like a romantic plea, and then in the end you bring it to the 21st century... But then again, not much goes with 'whim'

V. nice!

[lastingdreams8]

Lol, I'm really glad you liked it:) This really means a lot, from another writer's point of view:)

And it turns out, we can only be friends, but as Mignon McLaughlin said, "The best work is done with the heart breaking or overflowing."

And yes, actually, I added the last two lines in on a whim, because I needed something to complete it...well, I'm glad it's kinda cute;p
Thanks again <3