Series Fic: Outside (Part Two) (Lisa/Cormac)

[lar_laughs]

Story Header: Why Lisa Turpin never told Cormac McLaggen she loved him… and what happened when he found out anyway

Title: Outside (Part Two)
Genre: Gen (at the moment)
Claim: Harry Potter/Ravenclaws (46 - Pine) at 100_colours (and xposted at 1000ways_claw
Pairing/Characters: Lisa Turpin (Ravenclaw), Cormac McLaggen (Gryffindor)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 689
Warnings: Eek!

Comments

[terravayne]

One of the very things that she loved about him was his athletic ability. It was something she hoped carried over into… other areas.

What a terrific line. Love the way Lisa's personality really stands out even amidst the grumbling. And Cormac really is a thick idiot; it's a good thing we know that Hermione rejects him. Haha, and poor Lisa, that ending is truly bittersweet. This is my first time reading anything with Lisa in it and it was delightful. Good job!

[lar_laughs]

Once again, thank you! I'm having to reread Book 6 just to find out more about Cormac. Who knows what little shadowed places I'll find to slip in a Lisa/Cormac story!