Comments | lanie__rose: English story--open for corrections

lanie__rose

English story--open for corrections

Jan 07, 2007 19:50

Okay, so I had an english assingment based off Earnest Hemmingway's Hills Like White Elephants to write for Monday, and I wanted to post it here so my friends could edit it for me, but I figured I'd let everyone help if they were so inclined ( Read more... )

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lanie__rose January 8 2007, 01:02:11 UTC

Two things:

1) Thank you so much! I get compliments from my friends, but I can never tell if they're jsut being nice or if they're telling me the truth. So, getting praise from someone I don't know is really nice!

2) You stole the same icon from anolinde as I did.

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lanie__rose January 8 2007, 01:07:35 UTC

I thought it was good. It made a lot more sense after we talked about it in class. (Who could've figured out they were talking about an abortion?) I liked how vague it was, how they didn't have names, and how you could get the details without him having to state them outright.

...I wish I could write more like that.

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