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sweetlady1985 September 23 2009, 00:07:42 UTC
OMG! Excellent chapter!

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equus07 September 23 2009, 00:11:51 UTC
I remember this.
Its more than a lil heartbreaking. Its terrifying. Yet, the love is obvious for Kris from Adam. And for the baby. And the way Adam talks about Kris, you know the love for their baby is there as well.
Thank you for waking Kris up. :)

So I said stay and you haven’t left yet.” Kris brushed his dry lips over Kris’s chest as he made his way up. “Stay. There I’m saying it again Stay Kris.”
I think that first 'Kris' was meant to be 'Adam'.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon!

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alena1960 September 23 2009, 00:15:03 UTC
Oh thank God! I was so afraid.

Part 3 please. :)

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retrochic_21 September 23 2009, 02:16:28 UTC
I don't think I should be reading this story. All I do it cry over every word of it. Seriously you had me sobbing at the end of both of these chapters. The first one in complete and utter sadness because my heart was breaking and this because I was deliriously happy. Seriously this story is just so awesome.

Can't wait for the next part!!♥ I'm just going to sit here and refresh the page until it shows up.

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amberboc September 23 2009, 02:22:25 UTC
I have been dying for chapter 2, finally it's here! and Kris wakes up! You're cruel, mean to stop it there, please don't make us wait so long for chapter 3!!!! Lots of love!!

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