Bittersweet [15/?]

[laftkeichan]

Title : Bittersweet
Pairing : Uchipi - Ryotego
Summary : Tegoshi Yuya, a wealthy boy who always gets what he wants, suddenly decides to have a part time job just for fun
A/N : im back! with new fresh chapter *runs*
WARNING: new characters children ^^

Comments

[ryorin]

eh?
eh?

doushite?
doushite?

kame-chan?
kame-chan?
it's not for ryo?
crying together with ryochan
hixhix

and
uchi to yamap
cry with them too
T__T

pamnee
update soon please
ang ganbatte for ur internship ok..
hugss

[cherrylady6]

Wow, I'm in time and not late as always :D

Ah, the atmosphere between Uchi and Pi is so angsty D;
That was a bad situation Ryo used to tell Tegoshi that he is quitting >_< I hope he can arrange everything again ne ~ poor Tegoshi (did I really say poor Tegoshi to that little brat? xD) gets to know that on his birthday party .. :x

HOMG T__T Angsssst ♥ I love angst xDD I'm still enjoying the unhappy scenes between UchiPi and feel bad for it xD Somehow, I really appreciated it that Uchi didn't forgive Pi right away. That made it a lot better/realistic.
And for the last paragraph the same ♥ I already knew it, but I didn't know the person and there was no one else better than Kame xD You did a real good job here from what I can tell *_*
BUT NEXT ALREADY LAST!? -dies- Now I wanna what's happening xDD

And good luck with all you have to do x.x
-hugs-

[c_shayne]

Paamm! Hehe.aku lg iseng2 pake blackberry sodaraku eh kamu update! Heehee.

Aaaa.what's ryo's bday present for tegoshii?? I can't wait for the next chap! Hehe. I sense frustrated!Ryo coming ahead.hehe.

argh.will comment later when I got home.blackberry keypad is annoying! Hee. Ja ne~

[c_shayne]

yay im hommeeeee.

okay. back to commenting. ^^

“I love you, Tegoshi..” said Ryo in his heart so many times.
loooooove it. hehehe. im a sucker for ryotego rabu, so yeah. &hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts

i kinda like the ending. though, as i was reading towards the last part, i had a hunch that tego wouldnt give the cake to ryo. hehehe. and this will prompt ryo to do something BIG to fight for his lovely tego-nyan. yaaaaayyyy. i am soooo looking forward to your last chapter. i hope it's a happy ending ne~ ^___^

as for uchipi.. hmm.. i hope they'll get their happy ending too. huhuhu. poor uchi. he seemed so hurt and fragile. *pats uchi*

pam...bikin spinoffs aja kaya 'started with simple' series. heheheheheh~
*can't get enough of ryotego+uchipi*

[c_shayne]

oia lupa bilang. all the best for your assignments and internship! ^_____^

[tegomy]

waaa~ Yuya's angry :( poor Ryo-chan
And the next chap would be the last? I will wait for a new series...hehe ^^
Good luck with ur intership =)

[zxcvbnm109]

don't hide...xD

It's good...so much angst, which I loved. I always love angsty stuff, when will Uchi accept Pi again? Probably not, I think he'll be like friends with him or something like that in the end...

Ok, the RyoTego part, I had a little problem with... It was OK, not that bad...but Tego's bossiness, being very guliable is getting a little annoying...and I really feel bad for Ryo, having to deal with some jerk like that. (Oh shit, now I feel guilty calling Tego-chan a jerk...T___T)

Seriously, I can expect them being back together in a lovey-dovey, "funny" way, while UchiPi have the angsty, touching way...idk...just my analysis

(Ok, I'll shut up now...xD)

Please update soon! :)

[zxcvbnm109]

oh shit,

*gets a heart attack*

O___O, last chapter?!??! What is this- Chapter 15? Wow...I didn't notice we were up to 15 already...O___O

Well, there's no series/anything-in-life that never ends, right? I guess you could take a break after finishing this series...

(Ok, I'll REALLY shut up now...xD)

Adios! (No, I'm not Mexican, xD)