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Jump the Track: Chapter 5

Mar 15, 2011 21:18

Title - Jump the Track
Chapter - 5/?
Author - lafleurdumal85
Rating - NC-17
Summary - High school AU. It's Dean's senior year at Lawrence High, and he's already given up on himself. It takes the arrival of the strange, intense, awkward Castiel Delacroix at the school to prove to Dean that maybe his life is worth saving after all.
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dean/castiel, au, title: jump the track, rating: nc-17

Comments 35

waywardson_lvr March 15 2011, 22:11:58 UTC

Woohoo! A new part yeyah!
Just had to let you know I'm really enjoying this :)

lafleurdumal85 March 20 2011, 20:19:32 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you like it :D

nightflyer42 March 15 2011, 22:58:54 UTC

Yay, you updated! God, Dean is acting like a total asshole, and the saddest thing is that he doesn't even realize. Dean "Clueless" Winchester... *shakes head*
Um... I really don't like Lisa, so thank you for making her a vapid cheerleader. :-)
I'll be waiting for the next chapter, hoping thet Dean finally gets his head out of his ass.

lafleurdumal85 March 20 2011, 20:20:35 UTC

I know, I got so annoyed with Dean in this chapter. I really didn't mean for him to be so obnoxious!

You can probably tell that I don't think much of Lisa either XD

mulder200 March 15 2011, 23:50:13 UTC

Ugh! Dean was really not at his in the chapter but he IS a teenager.

Poor Cas though. It sounds like he could really use a friend.

lafleurdumal85 March 20 2011, 20:23:17 UTC

I got so annoyed with Dean writing this. I didn't mean for him to be so obnoxious, but he wouldn't have it any other way!

gunsrlove March 16 2011, 00:42:11 UTC

I was so excited to see another chapter! I could have smacked Dean upside the head a couple of times for his stupidness. Lisa and then Anna? Please Dean, use the smart brain you have. At least he's starting to think about the fact that he's so protective of his friendship with Cas. Can't wait to see the lightbulb slowly go on in his head. Looking so forward to more!

lafleurdumal85 March 20 2011, 20:25:02 UTC

I'm really glad you like it! I got so annoyed with Dean writing this chapter. I wanted him to behave better, but he was all NO, SORRY, I'M GOING TO BE A SLUT AND THEN HURT CASTIEL'S FEELINGS. Stupid Dean. He's a lot better behaved in the next chapter though :)

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lafleurdumal85 March 20 2011, 20:36:27 UTC

I'm really glad you like it :D

Yeah, I figured Dean would be pretty obnoxious at that age XD I'm hoping he'll make up for it in the next couple of chapters!