Drabble-o-rama

May 11, 2007 14:28

Um...
This is a ficlet. It is under-developed to the max. Basically, it's my first attempt at writing using the 
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crash_it_yo May 16 2007, 02:44:31 UTC
this is completely awesome.

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lafeelivresque May 17 2007, 19:54:03 UTC
Big thanks for saying so :)

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sharon_hate May 19 2007, 15:57:41 UTC
It's nice to read such a conversation driven fic. It's short and to the point, very direct. Good job.

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lafeelivresque May 20 2007, 20:29:47 UTC
Thanks so much =0) Dialogue's definitely my weak point, I really needed to get some practice in, so glad you found it readable!

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mamoo13 May 20 2007, 06:44:04 UTC
This is really good, I like it!!
The only thing is, and I'm going to feel somewhat geeky saying this... The Palahniuk references are more often going to come from Ryan than Brendon, considering Ryan does the lyrics. Yep, total oddball. Feel free to tell me to shut up, and disregard everything I've said... Other than that it was good, because it really was!!

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lafeelivresque May 20 2007, 20:29:00 UTC
Oooh I actually didn't know that! *part-time Panic fan alert* Thanks so much for pointing that out, though. I embrace the geekiness, it's cool in my book, and therefore so are you.
Glad you liked my wee drabble anyway =0)

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vinylsigns May 20 2007, 23:25:57 UTC
Ooooh, I liked this muchly :) I could definitely follow the logic of being trapped inside one's own head and how difficult it is to branch outside of it because the real world's a scary place, and all that. Leave it to Patrick to turn Pete's wold upside down ♥ Awesome!

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lafeelivresque May 20 2007, 23:34:31 UTC
Gosh, thanks so much =0)
That's actually something I think about a hell of a lot, it's always nice to know when other people recognise the stuff in your head. And I totally get that vibe from Pstrick - he doesn't necessarily understand Pete, but he totally gets him, y'know. They're ever so effing made for each other, it's almost sickening....

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periculosa May 22 2007, 04:11:28 UTC
Sometimes Patrick has a habit of letting you in on a conversation half way through. I’ve had a lot of practice in the art of catching up, but this time he’s left me standing in his dust.

Oh man, that was pure awesome, and so very Patrick (which, of course, is synonymous with awesome). You nailed their personalities, and the nuances of their communication were so perfect, in my opinion. This was very short and to the point, but not in a frustrating way. Basically ILY. And if you didn't cross-post this to patrickxpeter, you have to. Like, right now, because more people should read this.

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lafeelivresque May 22 2007, 09:32:58 UTC
Patrick = awesome. (I just wanna pinch his cheeks? Is that weird?)
Thankyouthankyouthankyou, you're too kind. Glad you liked it, and thanks for being specific too, it helps to know what I'm getting right vaguely.
I haven't cross-posted actually, mayhaps I shall do so now!

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