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Fic: This Charming Couple (V/O) 1/1

Jun 29, 2008 21:02

Title: This Charming Couple
Author: laeglass
Pairing: V/O
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit. This is fiction.
Warnings: Sex, swearing, the usual lot. ;) Also mention of toys.
A/N: Beta read by the great silvan_lady *huggles* Established couples can be cute too, you know?

( Oh, he'd get the Hobbits for this, he'd get them both individually and collectively, but right now, there was nothing much else to do but to laugh about the whole thing. )

fic: pairing: v/o, fic: one-shot, fics, fic: rps

Comments 53

kay_borriefairy June 29 2008, 19:42:03 UTC

I bloody loved it!!!!!

laeglass June 30 2008, 05:02:34 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad to hear that! :)

silvan_lady June 29 2008, 19:58:58 UTC

I agree 100% - you already know that I loved this and I'd also like to see more of them! It was wonderful to see that an established relationship can also be hot and sexy as well as comfortable, and I loved that neither partner was actually worried about what their other half had actually said to interfering Hobbits! *hugs* When can I expect part 2? ;)

laeglass June 30 2008, 05:08:04 UTC

Well, you certainly had your work cut out for you, what with my grammar and vocabulary! *g* I'm glad you liked it, I was a bit worried if anyone would be interested in my take of established!Viggorli - I'm glad to be proven wrong! *g*

I imagine them to be like this; comfortable with the other and the demands that are placed upon them, and still playful and sexy when the mood strikes (and why wouldn't it strike? Both are getting more sexy by the day! *g*).

I'll see what I can do, if the boys will allow me another glimpse in their life. ;)

silvan_lady June 30 2008, 08:42:02 UTC

Oh phooey! No trouble at all. *hugs* Feel free to ask anytime!

gattodoro June 29 2008, 20:13:26 UTC

Hee, it's quite stimulating to read something where Vi and Orli aren't the insatiable love gods that some (well, I!) paint them as.

Very sweet *virtual chocs for you*

laeglass June 30 2008, 05:10:38 UTC

Thank you :)

Insatiable love gods have their merits, but I thought established can be sweet too :)

eliriel June 29 2008, 21:02:29 UTC

Delicious !!! Great as your entire work,but with a new flavor.I liked this one,showing them as a normal couple,not as desperate like the first moments together but, still loving each other in the same fashion.
Big hug,Anna.
Liri

laeglass June 30 2008, 05:16:07 UTC

Thank you Liri! :)

I'm more used to writing coming together stories, but this time I was just too tempted to take a glimpse at this established couple's life :) I'm glad you liked it! Just because they're familiar with each other doesn't make them boring. ;)

ireth06 June 29 2008, 21:08:38 UTC

And you really had to stop there ... *frowns and grins*

It's nice to see friends worry about something like that ... it can only be the hobbits! (even if only two!)

The meddling did spark something naughty!
Loved it hun!
Thanks for sharing hugs and kisses!

laeglass June 30 2008, 05:17:10 UTC

Thank you! :)) At least their meddling was with good intentions, even if it was annoying and quite unnecessary in the sense that there was nothing wrong *g*