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ladyoni

Lives in Fast-Forward: Part II

Sep 01, 2010 23:44

Title: Lives in Fast-Forward
Series: All Our Yesterdays
Episode: 3 of 13
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: All TW series 1-3, and DW 1-4 (at minimum)
Summery: The new Torchwood three is just starting to get settled in when three seemingly unconnected students die in weird circumstances. Torchwood takes the case and finds the students seem to have been aged, but ( Read more... )

torchwood, ianto jones, fic, all our yesterdays, martha jones, gwen cooper, johnson, captain jack harkness, mickey smith, lives in fast-forward

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ravenja1170 September 2 2010, 13:55:34 UTC

not quite sure about the end (= "Jack was antsy ..."), it seems more to fit to the beginning??

Anyhow, loved the banter! :-)

ladyoni September 2 2010, 14:05:41 UTC

Thank you sooo much, it actaully is the beginning. Live journal fought with me tooth and nail last night when I was trying to put it up. It kept screwing up the format. Thanks for pointing it out.

and thank you I'm trying to keep the feel of Torchwood with team banter and such.

royalladyemma September 2 2010, 18:20:13 UTC

Just read the entire series from start to now -- amazing -- so glad Ianto's back, but what a rough patch to drag him thru first!

Also, I really like this new team -- Yeah, Ianto!!!! I love that he gave her "sub-standard" Ianto coffee -- can't think of anyone who deserves it more. And to bring in both Martha & Mickey? Stroke of brilliance! Is Tom going to join as a second medic/researcher/etc? Cause that would be really great!!!

Anyway, didn't like the fact that there's no more to read yet, tho -- hint, hint!!??!!?? Can't wait!!!!!

ladyoni September 2 2010, 18:57:26 UTC

Thank you so much. Yeah I kinda ran Ianto through the wringer, but I felt something like that was nescessary for a lot of different reasons. Things are going to get really interesting when you find out how he came back.

This team just felt right, and some of the dynamics have changed from when I was originally planning(What can I say these characters are stuborn and want to do things their own way)and the dynamic is going to go through changes as the series moves on.

We'll see what happens with Tom(he's probably not comming in until Ep 5)

I'm writing as fast as I have time to. Thankfully I've a buffer or there wouldn't have been any up this week. I'm in charge of a major project and an officer in a student organization while also just starting upper level classes. I'm happy you're so eager though.

royalladyemma September 2 2010, 19:05:11 UTC

You do have a busy life -- what sort of project are you in charge of? Which student org are in, and last but not least, what classes are you taking?

I have to admit, I really miss the innocence of my university years -- everything was so new and exciting and every day was an adventure!! But that was a long time ago, and things have settled way, way, way. way ad nauseum down!
Especially since I retired early -- my two yr anniversary was Tuesday -- seems like yesterday and it seems like just eons ago.

Anyway = good luck with your project & your classes -- In my book, those come first, the fic last, so no more pressure from me!!! Instead, I should be working on finishing my own fics!!!!! I get so far and then some new idea pops in and I rush off to write on that one and never go back to the first, and it just keeps going -- my bunnies must shag like Jack, I swear!!!!!