[SPN Fic]: A Mad Boy's Love Song - T - 1/1

[ladyknightanka]

A/N: I should not be allowed to go to school because, all that happens is, I get inspired to write fanfic. Sorry that this is so trippy and dark. I hope you like it, anyway. XD

Title: A Mad Boy's Love Song
Disclaimer: I, ladyknightanka, do not own Supernatural. Please don't replicate my silly work without permission. Pop-culture references aren't mine. Title and

Comments

[ladyknightanka]

I think all three brothers are at a point now where they're just jaded. Look at Dean. Almost every episode takes the opportunity to point that out, how world-weary he is, and even with a skewed sense of understanding, Adam can see it. He just doesn't care because he's the same, in a different way. It's poor Sam who's still trying, but even though I think Dean is a prime example of an older brother, Sam might have been a good one, too, given half the opportunity. Of course, I'm very disappointed by how he (and Dean) never even mentioned Adam in canon after dragging him into Hell, but I guess that's what fanfic is for. XD

Thank you so much, bb. I'm sorry if I hurt you or icon!Dean in any emotional way. I read the poem and simply had to get this angst out of my system, lol. As soon as I answer these comments, I'll put the meme up. ♥

[ladyknightanka]

Of course you did, lol. Putting the meme up now, technical difficulties not withstanding. See you on the flip side, baby.

[nights_fang]

Oh my, this is gorgeous. I have no other words for it, because my mind is just blown away by how beautiful it is.

[ladyknightanka]

Oh, bb, thank you. I'm so, so happy it had that effect on you. ♥

[_bluebells]

Wonderful use of the original poem and the alliteration made me smile in quite a few places.

This was incredible. I loved the abstraction of your visuals, the malice of the mundane through Adam's detachment and inability to translate or cope with the most ordinary things like the waitress's gum. Sam and Dean were perfect with Sam's sad persistence in spite of not knowing what to do, and Dean who'd already thrown up his hands and walked away rather than adding to the problem. I loved Michael's shifting appearance in that dreamscape and Adam's delirious response to everything around him. Perfectly dark and poetic.

I adore this. ♥

[ladyknightanka]

I felt like I cheated because I defaulted to a line of the poem, every singe time Adam had dialogue, but it's really a beautiful poem. It struck a chord with me -- not that I'm either mad or pining.

I am so, so happy you felt I did my inspiration justice in this. It wrote itself, for the most part, and I didn't argue with it. Alliteration and assonance are what I'm playing with more, on my writing professor's advice, because he says recursion is a key to good writing. The words, though, as I said, seemed to choose what came before and after. If only everything was so easy.

Thank you, dear. ILU. ♥

[ladyknightanka]

I will let you adopt him and fix him because his brothers aren't doing a very good job.

Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm so happy you enjoyed it and I agree, Adam post-Hell would realistically be damaged in a way like this. I love him and hope he gets to be happy, but he's been in Hell so long and no one's really tried to get him out; there's only so much optimism. I'm relieved the others came off as in character, too. :D *smishes for you and Adam*

[kettle_o_fish]

Oh my goodness, this is so amazing and heartbreaking. I love your Adam and I love the poetry you wove through his head. The end was so sad, but so eloquent! <3

[ladyknightanka]

Thank you so much. I've read Plath before, but never A Mad Girl, so when I heard it, I just thought of Adam and had to write this. I'm so happy you enjoyed it, bb. ♥