Comments | ladyjanelly: Fic: Threw Away the sun 2/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

ladyjanelly

Fic: Threw Away the sun 2/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

Oct 18, 2007 11:59

Title: Threw Away the Sun ( Read more... )

Comments 24

tabaqui October 18 2007, 17:53:01 UTC

“Nah, you go ahead.” It’s kind of weird, the way Sam’s body language is so flat, missing all the nods and shrugs and hand-gestures normal people use.

I love that little detail. Very cool. Interesting stuff!

ladyjanelly October 18 2007, 18:56:59 UTC

Thanks. This is probably the weakest chapter in the whole fic so I just posted the next one too.

tabaqui October 18 2007, 19:27:19 UTC

Did you think it was weak? I think i gave us a good idea about how Sam operates in the world - or doesn't, jeez - and what Dean has to expect... Not a bad chapter at all!
:)

fromyourashes October 18 2007, 18:04:07 UTC

omgomgomg

ladyjanelly October 18 2007, 18:57:23 UTC

Heh. I take it you're enjoying? :)

fromyourashes October 18 2007, 19:11:30 UTC

Yes!!! I cannot wait for more. I know there is more ALL READY and you're a tease. A bloody evil tease. LMAO!

elucreh October 18 2007, 19:50:02 UTC

Heh. Dean is totally sensing deep down that they're brothers.

I love Jess being obsessively protective and cryptic.

The blue tiles are a nice touch.

ladyjanelly October 18 2007, 22:12:43 UTC

He started it!

Heh. Dean.

minim_calibre October 18 2007, 20:55:47 UTC

So glad you've already posted the next chapter! I'd have been chomping at the bit, else!

ladyjanelly October 18 2007, 22:13:16 UTC

Yay!
I felt this was a weaker (or maybe just shorter) chapter, so I put up another one today.

embroiderama October 18 2007, 22:35:46 UTC

I love seeing how they manage with Sam both blind and out of his element here. *heads for next chapter*

ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 01:07:22 UTC

Heh. I'd meant to break Sam, just not quite this bad...