Comments | ladyjanelly: Fic: Threw Away the sun 2/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

ladyjanelly

Fic: Threw Away the sun 2/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

Oct 18, 2007 11:59

Title: Threw Away the Sun ( Read more... )

Comments 24

alchemie October 19 2007, 14:39:05 UTC

I'm so in love with the story I'm absolutely beside myself.

“I only see in the visions. In the best dreams, and the worst nightmares.”

What an absolutely brilliant and chilling line.

ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 01:09:05 UTC

Thanks. I'm thrilled when people like my favorites.

So glad you're enjoying. (please don't hate me later)

mre_quecky October 19 2007, 18:23:25 UTC

More soon, please?

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ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 01:18:32 UTC

That's so awesome that you liked that line. I just wanted to sort of invoke the spirit of canon-Sam in broken-Sam, to show somewhere they were so different.

And the visions, dreams, nightmares line was one of the 'concept' lines that I had in my head almost from the beginning--one that I wrote part of the chapter in order to get to.

leiadiana October 21 2007, 05:33:56 UTC

Still liking this premise. Any idea if/when you're going to bring John in? Thrilled to see this part and can't wait for more.

LeiaDianaMinerva

ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 05:39:29 UTC

Yes and soon on the John question.

Ch 3 and 4 are up. :) They're the two posts after this one.

culturegeek76 October 21 2007, 08:59:58 UTC

I love that Dean's snark is answered with patience. Canon Dean and Sam, even when it's AU - good for you to keep them in voice. "waiting for an invite" - "no dean you idiot, I'm not sure if we're stopped on the edge of a cliff, or how far to open the door so I won't scratch your pleasant paint job."

I'm glad D. becomes a little more considerate of Sam's needs.

Did he not catch on to the brother comment in the last chapter?

Also - I would make a horrible blind person. I'd be agoraphobic shut in extraordinaire. For certain.

ladyjanelly October 24 2007, 21:54:20 UTC

Canon Dean and Sam, even when it's AU

I really wanted it tohave that feel, like 3 degrees off true.

Heh. Sam knows the extents of Dean's obliviousness.

dude. I'd never leave my room if I couldn't see. Although I do pretty well when it's almost pitch-black. Better than my husband at least (he walked face-first into the bedpost a few nights ago).