FIC: Re-cast (scar!verse), ch 10/? rated PG Jensen/Jared

[ladyjanelly]

Special thanks to Jellicle for not letting me ditch half this chapter

Comments

[editorzon]

This was so beautiful in ways I have no words to express. I'm speechless, humbled and touched. Thank you for sharing this.

[ladyjanelly]

Glad it touched you like that. For a writer, that's incredibly flattering.

[editorzon]

What can I say, I think your writing is amazing. I read a lot but few things truly stay with me afterward or that I'll go back and want to read again and your writing makes me do both.

[blueshakko]

Oh, that was so nice!

[ladyjanelly]

Thanks!

[jellicle]

I'm so happy I convinced you to post this! It's so beautiful and lovely and warms me inside every time I read it. It's pure love, darling!
Really, you should be proud of this!

[ladyjanelly]

Oh, I am definitely proud of it. I think I was just a little afraid of it too. :)

Thanks for your support

[cal_j_fielding]

you wrote more...yay..

so yeah, this chapter...is awesome.

It's sweet and gentle, and a wonderful step for Jared to take.

“You want that for you?” He’s strung so tight, and Jared wants to beat whoever made this good-hearted man so wary.

That line right there...is so amazing...I just love that line so much.

Jared reaches and takes Jen's hand in his, closes his eyes and swears to yeah, God or whatever, that he’s not wasting this.

And this one too, is wonderful, caus eyou haven't made Jared overly religous...he's mostly just there for Jensen...but he understnads the importance of it, and yeah.

The whole thing is great, as always...I love how you write.

[ladyjanelly]

Thanks. I really wanted to focus on the emotional content, how it feels, rather than the message or what Jared thinks or believes. By the feedback I got, I think it worked.

Thanks for letting me know the lines that got you. Makes it easier to know what to leave in the next time.

[ladyjanelly]

Awww.

Thanks. I loves writing the happy boys.