Losers Fic: Walk a While With Me, 4/6

Jun 23, 2012 17:00

Title: Walk a While With Me 4/6
Author: LadyJanelly
Fandom: The Losers
Rating: Mature
Characters/Pairing: Jake Jensen/Carlos “Cougar” Alvarez
Warnings: Bullying, hazing, homophobia, racism, internalized homophobia, violence, language, mentions of previous assault and sexual assault,
Notes: Thanks to Peaceful_sands for her hand-holding, cheer-leading and ( Read more... )

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embroiderama June 23 2012, 22:52:57 UTC
LOVE! That kiss and then Clay with his grumpy way of showing he cares were great, but then the tech!

“Oh-em-gee, are you dating J-Mageddon? Seriously?”

HAH! I love that Jake's kept his hand in things and that among his kind he's viewed with awe and fear.

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ladyjanelly June 24 2012, 00:42:42 UTC
Clay doesn't get too much of a part in this one, but I did have fun with the lines he did get. Poor long-suffering Clay.

The tech I imagined as the little blond guy from Dollhouse? All spastic and high-strung.

among his kind Heh. Oh, he's still very active and respected. Old techs tell their trainees to respect the code of the geek or J-Mageddon will get them in the night. :) Giving Cougar some clues to how badass a hacker Jake was ended up being the real trick.

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twelve_pastels June 23 2012, 23:14:19 UTC
I really, really love seeing Jake be all kinds of awesome.

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ladyjanelly June 24 2012, 00:43:54 UTC
Heee! He's the hacker's boogeyman.

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xocoatldreams June 24 2012, 01:05:00 UTC
purple CGI rabbit - I nearly laughed myself silly at that. another great chapter, am loving this

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ladyjanelly June 24 2012, 04:13:19 UTC
Hee! I need someone to draw me the bunny, like a tough-guy bugs bunny with Jensen's glasses and scruff on his chin.

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xocoatldreams June 24 2012, 16:14:41 UTC
if my talents lent themselves to drawing and the like, I'd gladly do it for you. Unfortunately my stick people don't even look like stick people

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cleo1969 June 24 2012, 03:42:22 UTC
J-Mageddon? The ultimate in cyber armegeddon defense or offense depending on how much he likes you.

I'm loving this and looking forward but also dreading the rest. Dreading it because then it's gonna be the end and all done. When that happens I'll have to be content with rereading it.

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ladyjanelly June 24 2012, 04:17:22 UTC
Heh. I went around and around with the name. Like "Is it too silly?" but then again Jensen is pretty silly sometimes, and it's just so ridiculously over the top that I could see it, especially the man he was before he was driven out of the army.

If it helps your feeling of end-dread at all, I have almost 3000 words of time-stamps written already, with like six more self-prompts to explore. This story may end in another 10,000 words or so, but the boys don't look to leave me anytime soon.

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cleo1969 June 24 2012, 10:57:55 UTC
Yay for timestamps! *bounces*

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chasing_pillows June 24 2012, 08:15:02 UTC
I'm with Cougar on this one....He needs his own revenge, previous vengeances aside. Jensen WOULD be remembered as terrifying even after years. Hell even after Centuries, there'll still be tech's terrified of him, I'm sure of it.

So, yeah...There is SO MUCH LOVE for this fic. I just wanna snuggle with it.

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ladyjanelly June 24 2012, 14:28:17 UTC
Jensen is the hacker boogeyman when he wants to be. :)

So glad you're enjoying still.

Hope you're having a great weekend!
-J

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