Losers Fic: Walk a While With Me, 4/6

Jun 23, 2012 17:00

Title: Walk a While With Me 4/6
Author: LadyJanelly
Fandom: The Losers
Rating: Mature
Characters/Pairing: Jake Jensen/Carlos “Cougar” Alvarez
Warnings: Bullying, hazing, homophobia, racism, internalized homophobia, violence, language, mentions of previous assault and sexual assault,
Notes: Thanks to Peaceful_sands for her hand-holding, cheer-leading and ( Read more... )

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poetartist June 24 2012, 13:36:29 UTC
I just found this story and absolutely love it!
The gradual build of the relationship as they both sort through their issues feels real.
I can't wait to read more!

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ladyjanelly June 24 2012, 14:32:15 UTC
Can you believe that when I started this fic I thought it would be over in 5,000 words? There were so many points in the story where I despaired of them ever getting out of the friend-zone. But I'm really happy with how it came out and glad that the slow pace works for other people too. Thanks!

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linnet_melody June 24 2012, 23:26:30 UTC
“You didn’t tell me he didn’t want you to know!” he protests. “Did that not seem important?” Aaaaaaahahahahahah! That last sentence, right there. I can imagine the little guy staring at Cougar with ... just, this look. Like, "Would it have killed you to tell me that the man I idolize and worship and want to grow up to be one day would frown at me in disapproval over your request?!"

Second-favorite bit: the idea that Cougar had never kissed a man. *delicious shivers*

I'll say it again. I love you.

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ladyjanelly June 25 2012, 13:29:36 UTC
Poor twitchy tech. I'll have to write a timestamp or something where Jake forgives him (because really, he was trying to help Cougar and Jake has to respect that) and gives him tips and they chat.

Man, I love first kisses, especially when it's emotionally stunted or damaged men.

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