I love this! I'm hoping you're going to write more, you know, make it a 'verse. The characters are great (hawt) and your story is smart, hurty and sexy. Ben and Alec in the forest, running free. What an idea. *yum*
“I’ll behave,” Ben said. “I’ll be good I promise,” and Alec didn’t know what that meant but there was nothing he could think of that Ben might want to do that Alec didn’t want done. <-- for some reason, that didn't strike me during the beta, but it's so GOOD. Poor Ben. :(
You're insane if you think this is the ending, right? RIGHT.
It's scary to write Alec this way, because the situation has stripped him of some of his need to smart-mouth the world. Who can he try to impress or keep away here? So what does he do when he can't. So glad it worked for you.
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Heh. Part of the reason I had them go the back way was because I'd had Ben and Sam run away in a vehicle and wanted to do something different.
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“I’ll behave,” Ben said. “I’ll be good I promise,” and Alec didn’t know what that meant but there was nothing he could think of that Ben might want to do that Alec didn’t want done. <-- for some reason, that didn't strike me during the beta, but it's so GOOD. Poor Ben. :(
You're insane if you think this is the ending, right? RIGHT.
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You know I started writing this so I could do a da/firefly crossover, right? Stupid run-on prologue.
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I like this verse because they're little self-contained fics. Less pressure that way.
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Thank you for sharing with us :)
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Oh, Ben. Poor crazy thing.
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