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December Fireworks

Mar 03, 2008 09:51

Title: December Fireworks
Author: ladygray99
Fandom: Northern Exposure
Pairing/Characters: Chris/Ed/Joel
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sometimes all it takes is a properly poetic description.
Word Count: 5,211
Spoilers: None
Notes: I would really, really, really like feedback here. I know it’s basically PWP but I tried to keep voices consistent.
Warnings: threesums, first ( Read more... )

rating: nc17, *favorite, pairing: joel/chris/ed, fireworks, fic, fandom: northern exposure

Comments 23

stillwell March 3 2008, 01:49:57 UTC

This is so fabulous! You absolutely captured their voices, so beautifully.

The only typo i found was this: "I’m writing you a *perception* for a topical antibiotic... (Though I kinda like that as a statment :)

My only critique is that now I want more. Nice job *

ladygray99 March 3 2008, 04:13:38 UTC

Yeah!!!! Someone read this. NX is such a small fandom and there's realy one place to post so I didn't think anyone was going to read. (translation: I'm a major feedback slut)

I've got ideas for sequals, some involving serious plot but i've got several major numb3rs epics plus some origonal writing first. give me a couple of months and I'll try to get out more :-)

Thanks for the fix and the feedback.

stillwell March 3 2008, 15:45:02 UTC

You're welcome, and I'll keep an eye out for more :)

anonymous March 3 2008, 17:59:52 UTC

It was a first time for me as well. I never see Northern Exposure (Not even sure it was aired in France...) or read something related to it for that matter.

So what a first time (not mine,lol, I'm back on your story), Dr F. doesn't do the things in half (not sure about that one, it make sense in French, but...).

I must say I didn't catch the way the rumour spread. I guess it was pictorial, and my english failed me sometimes (ok often).

Ninou

ladygray99 March 3 2008, 19:35:24 UTC

Hey that's ok. Thanks for reading even if you don't know the fandom. I think the English phrase you're going for is 'Dr. F doesn't do things by halves.' It's a very strange phrase and rather old fashion English but the French is very close.
Thank you again for reading :-)

anonymous March 3 2008, 19:53:12 UTC

You're welcome, it's always a pleasure to read you're story.

I wasn't that far... Thanks for correcting the expression, I'm going to bed more clever (again a french expression, lol)

Ninou

Fabulous bunnyalien March 5 2008, 22:39:05 UTC

The voices are perfect - brings it all back! I do hope you continue. (And dp is a favourite kink . . .)

Re: Fabulous ladygray99 March 5 2008, 23:10:01 UTC

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it and always glad to hit a kink. :-)

*is dead* anonymous March 31 2008, 00:30:44 UTC

Ok. You killed me with hotness. That was . . whoa! That position is not used enough in ANY fic, and your imagery is beautiful. I've only just discovered nx and I was gutted to see how tiny the fandom is - but this made my day! Possibility of a sequal you say - hell yes say I! x

Re: *is dead* ladygray99 March 31 2008, 00:38:06 UTC

:-) the sequel is being worked on. I just have a lot of irons in the fire so it may take a while. glad you enjoyed it. go forth and spread the word that is NX slash goodness. there really are too few of us.

whiteraven1606 April 2 2008, 17:17:39 UTC

Thanks for the link. I've not seen this show in so long I barely remember the show. :) That's okay though, the porny bits were lovely and they've kept me from killing any co-workers. I'm begging for more of this when you've a chance.

ladygray99 April 2 2008, 18:48:59 UTC

Glad it could prevent homicide. I've got a lot of fic in the fire right now but I'll see if I can jump the next one up the line a bit. ;-)

ladygray99 April 12 2008, 22:17:38 UTC

It's not much but a little threesum to brighten your day. http://ladygray99.livejournal.com/38182.html#cutid1