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ladygray99

The Modern Man I Sing (fic) FRAO

Nov 05, 2007 22:01

Title: The Modern Man I Sing
Author: ladygray99Chapter: 1/1 ( Read more... )

rating: nc17, fandom: numb3rs, whitman, pairing: charlie/colby, fic

Comments 70

dreamerjules October 14 2008, 19:03:22 UTC

Found this last week sometime and I've been reading and re-reading ever since. This is so beautiful. Just so beautiful ( ... )

ladygray99 October 14 2008, 19:09:43 UTC

Thank you for the feed back. I always like long comments. Colby coming to terms and love is worked out in Sing My Body Electric.

As for why no bondage? Well that will be explained in Whitman 4 which is about 15,000 words from being done as we speak. look for it before new years. It also explains a little more about the arrangement. And if can cool your heals for another year or so you get to see to boys tied up a little.

Glad you liked this.

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ladygray99 November 23 2008, 23:55:03 UTC

:-) Welcome! And thinks for reading. I'm glad you like this and there's lots more for you to go through.

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ladygray99 January 11 2009, 06:34:31 UTC

Thank you. If you click the link at the bottom of the story it'll lead you on to about 200K more words In the 'verse.

laura_trekkie January 15 2009, 01:49:22 UTC

I was in the mood for some Charlie/Colby tonight and this hit the spot nicely. It was such an intriguing concept. It's easy to assume that Charlie talks in numbers all the time because he likes them, but I could certainly understand that he'd want to be able to see the world without numbers sometimes ( ... )

ladygray99 January 15 2009, 01:54:13 UTC

:-) Well welcome and thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this. there are three sequels. About 160K words so I wouldn't recommend trying to stay up all night and read through but I do hope you enjoy them. if you're looking for something a little lighter the Vignettes 'verse listed on my main page is also Charlie/Colby.
Again thank you and enjoy.

samueljames January 19 2011, 18:51:57 UTC

Great look at everyone's POV. I can believe Charlie needing the pain and Colby's fear at such a huge responsibility came across really well. Don's anger was very in character but I liked that he lost his temper a few times during the discussion with Colby, it wouldn't be him to immediately accept Colby's explanation. I also liked his references to therapy and having to lie about his hand.

ladygray99 January 20 2011, 02:49:53 UTC

Thank you. This story was just meant to be a little h/c smut but it got completely out of control very early on. I did my best to give everyone real emotions and reactions as it went on.