Comments | ladygray99: (fic) 27 Hours

ladygray99

(fic) 27 Hours

Jan 19, 2010 16:11

Title:27 Hours
Author: ladygray99
Rating: PG13 for language
Word Count: 1,134
Characters: Alan Eppes, Carl McGowan
Summary: Alan always knew his past might come back to haunt him. He never thought it would haunt his boys.
Spoilers: Protest, High Exposure, The Decoy Effect, Blowback, Jack Of All Trades
Notes: I've had this running around my head for a while ( Read more... )

fandom: numb3rs, *favorite, rating: pg13, character: carl mcgowan, character: alan eppes

Comments 13

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ladygray99 January 20 2010, 03:24:42 UTC

Thank you. I always felt McGowan was a bit of a cardboard villain and needed some sort of deeper motivation for going after Don and Charlie the way he did.

swingandswirl January 19 2010, 05:54:54 UTC

Whoa. Totally new perspective on McGowan's vendetta- Tammy likey.

(also, it's don't forget to pay the debt, not debut. /beta hat)

ladygray99 January 20 2010, 03:25:14 UTC

Do'h! Thank you beta!Tammy. This is what happens when I write at 3am and post before coffee.

boymommytotwo January 20 2010, 05:29:23 UTC

yeah, i didn't like him very much. dislike him more, now.

::growls::

~a

ladygray99 January 20 2010, 07:14:33 UTC

Well I don't think he was there to be liked.

aleo_70 January 20 2010, 06:58:07 UTC

Nice bit of background. Love Alan in this.

ladygray99 January 20 2010, 07:14:48 UTC

Thank you. I always love writing Alan.

riverotter1951 January 20 2010, 15:45:34 UTC

Beautiful. I enjoy reading gap fillers. This makes perfect sense. McGowan is letting the past influence his actions. The last remark by Alan is perfect showing his trust in his sons.

ladygray99 January 21 2010, 02:00:33 UTC

Glad you liked it. I thought there was a gap the needed to be filled and Alan is always a pleasure to write.