Putting Back the Pieces of Us (damon/bonnie, tvd fic)

Nov 14, 2010 22:08



Title: Putting Back the Pieces of Us
Fandom: TVD
Pairing: Damon/Bonnie (faint implications of Damon/Elena, Bonnie/Jeremy if you squint mightily, especially the latter) Summary: Sometimes, we fall to pieces or life collapses around us. We put ourselves together again. Maybe not perfectly, but that's how we learn to survive . AU early season 3.
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au, character: damon salvatore, pairing: bonnie/damon, dark ships, angst, character: bonnie bennett, single shot, nc17, tv: the vampire diaries

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midnightblack07 November 15 2010, 08:17:52 UTC
I absolutely adored this!! There was something so *real* about it, about Elena's death bringing them together (it kind of reminded me of the overall theme of "The Lovely Bones," if you haven't watched it, I highly reccomend it... it's a bit campy, but heartbreakingly impactual nonetheless). I loved how you had Caroline bring some levity to this fairly bleak predicament... and Damon showing up at Bonnie's house unannounced with his obnoxious smoke-screen in over-drive was utter perfection... really amazing stuff :)

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ladygawain November 16 2010, 04:57:10 UTC
Oh, thank you so much. I haven't seen that movie yet, I keep meaning to but it never works out.

Caroline was my favorite, I've never written her before, so it was fun to try. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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skysamuelle November 15 2010, 12:30:36 UTC
sad and real and gut-whenching. It leaves you hanging and craving more even after yopu are past last line.

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ladygawain November 16 2010, 04:56:00 UTC
Thank you --- yes, that's exactly what I wanted with the last line! Thank you :)

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sparkly_oats November 16 2010, 00:13:03 UTC
This was gorgeous - very intense and I don't know..quiet. I reminded me a lot of Spike & Buffy. Man you've really written something amazing here!!

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ladygawain November 16 2010, 04:55:18 UTC
Thank you. "Quiet" is a perfect way to describe what I was going for, I didn't want it to be flashy and telegraphy, just for things to sort of happen the way they would in real life when you just find yourself next to someone and it makes sense -- no fanfare, no incessant talking about it, it just is. So yes.

Thank you so much :)

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lempickaa November 16 2010, 20:05:32 UTC
that was amazing :)
I love your writing and I loved this story :)

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ladygawain November 18 2010, 11:28:05 UTC
Thank you :)

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fiestyxgirlx18 November 16 2010, 20:08:39 UTC
That was so amazinq written! I love this story! There something real about it, that should happen on show!

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ladygawain November 18 2010, 11:30:35 UTC
Thanks so much, I'm thankful you liked it. I think my heart would break if Bonnie ever became something like this on the show, break into a million pieces. But they could definitely pull her along a dark path if they wanted to a few more seasons in *sob*

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fiestyxgirlx18 November 19 2010, 04:18:32 UTC
Your welcome! That what I mean, It w'd be interesting to see that happen on show! I think they went in the dark path that will make Damon get involved!

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