To Tear You Apart [One-shot]

[ladydusk_raku]

Title: To Tear You Apart
Length: One-shot
Author: LadyDusk_Raku
Rating: R/NC-17
Genre: Angst, Drama, Dark
Pairings: YunJae (slight mention of ChunJae)
Summary: You did this, you destroyed it, and yet you can only bring him crashing down with you.

Comments

[ilds]

woah!
angsty

[mighty_angel]

really cool. A little confussed but really cool. And really angsty. nice work:3

[crimsonarcenon]

woooooo angsty much?!! hehehhe i love it gyahhhh my inner angsty self is perking-up?? wahahah ohhhh the ending hmmmm it seems jaejoong got a disease of some sort and also yunho?? hmmm im guessing HIV?? just a wild guess ^__^ ohhh btw thanks for this wonderful written fic...

[karlaxjaejoong]

HOLY.SHIT

So angsty but I love it<3 Damn, yunho is scary here *shudders* Anyways, your writing forever will leave me breathless. It's like I'm watching a movie; I can picture it very clearly.
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Leaning down to grab an empty bottle on the ground, you fling it at the door, watching it shatter into millions of shards, like a replica of your entire life.

“SON OF A BITCH!” You fall back on the dingy table, uncaring of the dust and sweat that irritates your wounds further. You cup your face with your hands, ignoring the stinging in your eyes as you rock back and forth and laugh yourself sick.

WOW...wow. That's all I can say. But come to think of it, this kind of yunho is smoking hot. Yes, I'm sick like that<3
Can you add me? I would love to read your wonderful works<3

[uke_jae007]

SHIT.

That was amazing.

I mean... damn,

I'm at a loss for words.

Great angst.

[xsinfulxtouchx]

Lol this was my old account... oh well, I read this again. ♥ so gooood~