10 Sentences Meme

[ladyassassin27]

 

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[jusrecht]

I... I missed this post omg >>

And how I enjoyed these sentences ♥ I think some of them are too long though XD But omg, the AU, I seem to remember a fic I read long long time ago /coughs

LOL A-LAWS.

A-and I kinda want to see the rest of the fluff section 8D /nudges

The UST section is canon btw XDD

Gino/Suzaku ♥

[ladyassassin27]

Thank you! <333

I know I need to finish the AU, I haven't forgotten about it, and I intend to start working on it again after my exams get over.

the first thing that popped into my head for a crossover, was G00, and yes A-LAWS ftw XP. I imagin Suzaku is from HLR and Gino form the Union

Then it shall be done! XD

Totally! XD

Expanding on what Jurescht has already said by 'too long'

[xoxeskel]

So, uh, reading through the comments to jusrecht's post (dw, it's not nearly as stalker-ish as it sounds -- I was merely trying to find out what the general reaction was to the CG drabble. Still can't believe no one aside from me commented on the symmetry ;_;) tells me you'd like feedback...?

Angst, AU and Crackfic: try for more subtlety. If there's something that can be said in less words, do so. The main appeal of any drabble is the ability to convey so much meaning in so little words.

A more general comment: typos and missplaced commas distract the audience from the flow of the overall piece. Makes the entire seem a lot less impressive than it should.

If you want more in depth comments, feel free to tell me, yes?

Re: Expanding on what Jurescht has already said by 'too long'

[ladyassassin27]

It's not stalker-ish, I too generally like to read the opinions of the others who have commented to a post.

I do actually. It's nice to know what people think, and how else can we improve right?

Thanks for the comment, I'll try an work your suggestions. Don't worry, there no need for a more indept comments. ^^