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lady_sb

Fanfiction: Back to You (Part II)

Jan 13, 2010 01:56

Prompt: (#2) The Audience from 30_lemons, table found here

A/N:Greetings everyone :) Firstly for all of those who read the first part and commented, thank you SO very much. That really made my day and I'm really happy that so many of you enjoyed it. I must apologise for taking longer than I expected with this part, but didn't have a great weekend but all ( Read more... )

ten lemons for ten pairings, reitaxruki, fanfiction: the gazette, rukaxkai, fanfiction: nightmare, back to you, aoixuruha

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lady_sb January 13 2010, 17:02:37 UTC

Well I'm glad you were the first to comment *hugs* and you did get the ball rolling so to speak ^^

I know how you feel about Ruka, hence why I appreciate that you read it for the story progression. Regardless, I love writing Kai just being so sexual because he never comes across that way but I can sense that passion just bubbling beneath the surface.

And of course I loved writing the AoixUru moments so I'm glad you picked that out. Also that sentence from Reita was one of my faves as well ;) boys and their toys.

I'm plotting part 3 as we speak so fingers crossed!

keimaxwell January 12 2010, 21:30:29 UTC

Damn, Kai!
Even hotter than the last chapter (but I'm a Kai-fan, so... XD).
More~ D:

lady_sb January 13 2010, 17:17:44 UTC

Thanks ^^ Kai is my fave member after Aoi n Uru so I loved writing him <3 Am starting to draft Part 3 now :)

shizukasou January 12 2010, 21:31:33 UTC

Aoi looked at Uruha warily but then staggered back as the blonde suddenly roughly kissed him before striking him in the jaw with a solid hook. I lol'd here. Your Uruha's just too epic to be true. And Aoi coming up from nowhere, that was great.
I also loved how you depicted their characters, I think they're very realistic, close to what they truly are. I appreciated that a lot.
Let's not talk about the smut, 'kay? *tries to hide the drool*
I'm on the edge of my seat anticipating what a blast next chapter will be, so I really hope you'll update soon! :3

(yup, you get my slutty!Uru icon again 'coz you totally deserve it.)

lady_sb January 13 2010, 17:23:32 UTC

Thank you ^^ and on my side, I really appreciate your comment about the realism, its actually one of the best compliments that a writer can receive.

And glad you like the smut ^_^

erikaoi January 12 2010, 21:41:10 UTC

Kaixruka smut hawt.never imagine that pairings.wonder what happen with uruxaoi.going to be 1nite fuck buddies or going back to each others?update soon,want to read it

lady_sb January 13 2010, 17:39:37 UTC

Thanks for the comment ^^ (and yes they are hot together). Am working on part 3 now :)

viciousfaye69 January 12 2010, 22:40:58 UTC

Jesus!!!!!!!!
Freaking Hot!!!!
I never really saw Kai with Ruka before but now I think that they make one sexy pair.
And seriously why are Aoi and Uru always at the right pleace and right time.
Uru just needs to stop lying to himself and admit that he loves and misses Aoi.
Good job can't wait 4 the next part^^

lady_sb January 13 2010, 17:46:43 UTC

Thank you ^^ and for me they always made such a sexy pair <3 but then I'm seriously partial to drummers.

Ahh more will be revealed in the next part (which I'm drafting at the moment)