Fanfiction: Back to You (Part II)

Jan 13, 2010 01:56

Prompt: (#2) The Audience from 30_lemons, table found here

A/N:Greetings everyone :) Firstly for all of those who read the first part and commented, thank you SO very much. That really made my day and I'm really happy that so many of you enjoyed it. I must apologise for taking longer than I expected with this part, but didn't have a great weekend but all ( Read more... )

ten lemons for ten pairings, reitaxruki, fanfiction: the gazette, rukaxkai, fanfiction: nightmare, back to you, aoixuruha

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kurrren January 12 2010, 22:57:18 UTC
I've never thought of Ruka/Kai but this was... smoldering hot.. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Oh and this was just... funny :D
Ruka licked his lips appreciatively at his nude lover, liking Kai’s firm build and toned biceps. It would have come as a surprise to Uruha to know that Ruka preferred his male lovers that way, for the drummer reasoned that if he wanted to fuck a woman, he would have found a woman.

Greaaat job!

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lady_sb January 13 2010, 17:50:58 UTC
Thanks :) glad you found it hot despite the less than conventional pairing *gives you cookie*

Am working on the next chapter now so hopefully it won't take that long. And I liked that scene as well, it was inspired by the fact that Kai keeps saying that he is going to gym and toning up so he can drum better.

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kurrren January 13 2010, 18:28:51 UTC
*munches on cookies*
I think it was a very nice pairing, I mean Ruka and Kai are both incredibly hot, and 2 hot men doing naughty things with eachother.. I'm not complaining! :D

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kawasakininja January 12 2010, 23:34:40 UTC
Uruha seems like a real piece of work. his perverted tendencies only seem to be escalating but his hostility towards Aoi was so very entertaining. Kai and Ruka were interesting, I actually laughed at Kai's piss poor luck with men with the mentioning of Miyavi, I am not sure I really felt the pairing, but the angle with insecure Kai and Ruka giving him confidence was nice idea, plus they seemed to fit well together where sex (and a bit of exhibitionism) was concerned. But Aoi took the cake here, of course he was bound to show behind Uruha but when he actually did it was still exciting and of course the whole dry humping thing took their little game to another level, their sex simulation was maybe hotter than the actual sex between Ruka and Kai.

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lady_sb January 13 2010, 18:00:32 UTC
Lol I think Uruha just has a knack of being at a certain place at a certain time. And I do like writing the hostile interaction between so I'm glad you pointed that out.

Well the pairing isn't for everyone, but in my mind it works mostly because I think its a case of two people who you would never think together but actually have a lot of attributes that fit. But I'm glad you liked the little scene in the middle.

And yes, Aoi does have a tendency to steal the show as he always does ^^

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irmavep777 January 13 2010, 00:41:18 UTC
I was like : no wayy!again?:Dbut it was now even better than before!!!!
Ahh I dunno why but I really like your Aoi!It's just so like him..
And Uru is a perv!!But I like it how Aoi is always in the right time at the right place:P
The ending was epic:DI loled hard:D
Can't wait for the third part!!!

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lady_sb January 13 2010, 18:01:26 UTC
Yes again! Lol thanks for the comment and following all the way through. Am drafting the third part now so see how it goes.

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dani_25 January 13 2010, 04:13:46 UTC
Lolz!!! why does Aoi have to appear from nowhere everytime around?? that was epic!! hahah!!

and this is going to be a reunited.... ^_~

the Aoi/Uruha sex part must be the hottest of all here!! i demand!! lolz!!!

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lady_sb January 13 2010, 18:02:39 UTC
Lol Aoi has a knack of just being in the right place at the right time ;) And I hear your demand, I'm drafting part 3 now so fingers crossed it won't take me too long.

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ruksugi January 13 2010, 05:10:19 UTC
Leave it to Ruka to want to please his audience. Always knew he would make a good pron star.^_^

The conversations and the sex, between both the drummer boys (I want Kai Now!!!), and their voyeuristic onlookers , was so hot I had to stop my self from drooling to hard on my computer. Now I hope that Uruha doesn't try to kick Aoi out (Emotionally Anyway) after they screw each others brains out. It was funny that Uruha was in the same costume as the last time, bet he will love that look for a while. LOL

I also like the connection this has to your other story about Nightmare, they tie in nicely to each other.

Can't wait for the update!

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lady_sb January 13 2010, 18:10:03 UTC
Hahaha you and my friend think the same, she is the one that said that Ruka being a Hakuei fanboy actually has that similar porn star vibe to them.

Glad you liked the smut ^^ and I'm drafting part 3 now so hopefully more answers soon. I actually really like Uruha's Before I Decay outfit, hence why I liked to keep it.

And thank you for remembering my Nightmare fic! In my universe I rarely break my OTP's so it was nice to be to link it. ^^

Thanks again for commenting!

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