Fanfiction: Drifting (Part V)

[lady_sb]

A/N: Well here it is the final part ^^ Despite having written this before, it was actually surprisingly difficult. To all of those who read and commented, really, from of the bottom of my heart, thanks, you guys made my day more than you realise

Comments

[aitakute]

GORGEOUS! *applauds* I love the changes you do to the ending! Love how Ruka now is smitten with Kai, but yet his uncertainty of leaving Ni~ya and Sakito was such a sweet thing, and I love how Sakito knows how to let go and still keep the doors open. After all, that was exactly why they do it in the first place, and to remember it at the end is just the perfect roundup to this fic.

I think the rewrite, in entirety, really did them much justice - as you said, you know the boys better now than you did back then. Awesome!

Also, on the beta front, I don't think there's anything apart from this:-
“And he loves him,” he continued as he slowly moved forward,
Shouldn't it be 'you'?

[lady_sb]

Fixed! It should be "me". Man I always cringe so much when I realise my mistakes....I literally go arrraaggghhh *presses edit button frantically*.

Yes this was the part I changed the most. Actually I contemplated long and hard whether I should change it or leave it as is. In the end, I decided to go for something more bittersweet not just because Ni~yaxSakito is an OTP for me, rather for the fact that I thought it made sense.

And yup Sakito learning to let go, with Ni~ya's help. Glad you like the rewrite! *hugs* it was a hard process doing this from hard copy but finally, its done :)

[h_itoshi]

Awww~~~ Kai <3 I like that match actually, I've never thought about it before xD

You did a very good job rewriting this, and I'm so happy that Ruka got someone finally... :)

I hope you'll write more Nightmare, thank you for posting this <3

[lady_sb]

Yes I always thought that some parts of their personality would fit quite well :) So I am happy that someone else thinks so as well *gives you cookie*

And yeah, I was sad but happy at the same time that Ruka had to leave them but that he found someone.

Thank you! I will try my best to write more ^^

[neo_tenshi]

Ah, read it yesterday but didn't have the time to comment then, thankfully I remember it today because the story definitely does deserve the comment.

Just the right amount of hotness and good writing, a combination which cannot fail! Kind of left you blushing but didn't ruin your panties, if I can be honest. *laugh*

I sort of understand if people wanted a sequel for this, but whan I'm more interested in is the period of time Ruka spent with Saki and Ni. It's concluded beautifully in ths story, but I kind of needed more. There's a lot of potential with how Saki and Ni handle their relationship with Ruka around, and of Ruka's emotional swirl when Kai enters the picture. But of course, I'm not demanding a thing, I enjoyed it as it was and I definitely look forward to reading any Nightmare fiction from you.

Thank you for the story, haven't been quite as captivated in a long time!

[lady_sb]

Firstly thank you so much for reading and remembering for the comment ^_^ I really appreciate that.

I have to say, that you actually did give me something to think about and affirmed something I was thinking about already. Writing a piece that would explain how the dynamics of a three way relationship would work and how Ruka would mesh with Kai (and I've always wanted to write a RukaxKai)

So will see how it goes ^^ Hopefully inspiration strikes, I just need to scribble it down.

But thank you again for the nice long comment :)

PS: LOL it wasn't underwear dampening enough? Darn I didn't do my job (jk)