Comments | lady_sb: Fanfiction: Drifting (Part I)

lady_sb

Fanfiction: Drifting (Part I)

Nov 22, 2009 21:00

Title: Drifting
Fandom: Nightmare
Pairings: Ni~yaxSakito (main), RukaxNi~yaxSakito
Rating: NC17
Spoilers/Warnings: Smex and threesomes.
Disclaimers: I don’t own them, I’m not implying any of this is true, God isn’t that nice to me.

Summary: Life has been going well for Ni~ya. Not only is he doing well at something he loves, it has also brought ( Read more... )

drifting, ni~yaxsakito, fanfiction: nightmare

Comments 6

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lady_sb November 23 2009, 02:31:02 UTC

Yes "awwww" I think those two make a great couple. And of course you can add me :) will add you back as well.

I haven't written fanfiction for a while actually I realised :S but you and a couple other writers have actually inspired me start again ^^

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lady_sb November 23 2009, 13:54:04 UTC

Lol it was well done ^^ you should be happy with it. It was you and narcolepticmu that actually made me want to write this pairing again. I hope you guys like Drifting ^^

aoisbedroom November 23 2009, 21:51:25 UTC

neeeeee my first nightmare fic & i totally <3d it! @_@ will be reading the 2nd chapter tonight!!! I wanted 2 try read before i head out to work so i can have a better day ^^

lady_sb November 24 2009, 16:55:23 UTC

*hugs* Thank yo for commenting.....and that icons is so phwoarrrrr

aitakute November 26 2009, 05:18:40 UTC

Comment! XDDDDD

First up, I like the changes you did to the fic! Admittedly I still don't know the boys much apart from your anecdotes, but I could picture them running through the conversations in my head. Ni~ya replacing Sugichan for the opening banter with Yomi was a good idea, and sneaking in Hitsugi and Aki is brilliant XDDD Now we don't have to rely on Sugichan's ex-chef boyfriend ;)

Though how much changes did you do to this chapter? *curious* I'm struggling to recall how you wrote (stylistically, I mean), because this sounds like the way you write recently so either you've changed things significantly (stylistically) or you haven't really change much in writing style since back then (though I'm more willing to bet on the former than latter).

*off to Ch 2*

lady_sb November 27 2009, 06:23:55 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked the changes (esp since when I originally wrote it, it was a present for you). After seeing Hitsugi a bit more, I realise he can be playful but Ni~ya is the one that has more of the snark so he fits teasing Yomi a lot more lol

I changed around the characters mostly, cleaned up the dialogue. I think my writing style has evolved somewhat hopefully. I didn't change that much admittedly

*follows you to chap 2*