Fanfiction: Me and Mr. Jones (Chapter 6)

Sep 25, 2008 02:50

A/N: Wow its midway and judging by all the feedback everyone has given me, I am so flattered that everyone is liking how this story is panning out ( Read more... )

me and mr. jones, fanfiction: torchwood, jackxianto

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lucy_locket September 24 2008, 20:01:36 UTC
Amazing, as usual. I love the look between them at the end, gazing at each other across the dance floor.

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lady_sb September 26 2008, 18:00:37 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked it *blushes a tad*. And yeah it was always the looks between the boys that I loved in the show....its like they never have to say anything but it still packs an emotional punch.

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suki_blue September 24 2008, 20:06:50 UTC
You tease!! LOL!

My heart is all fluttery and panicked for them.

Brilliant chapter.

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lady_sb September 26 2008, 18:04:10 UTC
Lol sorry to be a tease *bows* and thanks for the compliment :)

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teachwriteslash September 24 2008, 20:37:14 UTC
Oh so many layers to this . . .

I do not like the way Lisa treats Ianto . . .

Lisa is hiding something . . .

My heart aches for the boys . . .

Gwen - oh sigh child - you don't give people answers to crosswords . . .

Owen .... hmmmm ..... Owen needs a lady

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lady_sb September 26 2008, 18:08:17 UTC
Yes, you never finish people's crosswords, its just bad manners I feel unless they ask for help =_=;;

Thanks for the comment, glad you are liking how its playing out ^_^

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bookwrm89 September 24 2008, 20:38:59 UTC
So glad to see this updated! Oh oh...what's wrong with Lisa?
Can't wait for more!

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lady_sb September 26 2008, 18:10:26 UTC
So sorry for the delay *bows* and the next chapter should yield some answers...sorry for being cryptic *hands cookie*

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kneadyrn September 24 2008, 20:46:03 UTC
You write so discriptively and vividly, so well done. I hope you won't make us wait too long for the next part.
Keep up the excellent work!

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lady_sb September 26 2008, 18:11:44 UTC
Thank you for the compliments, its one of the best things a writer can hear ^_^. Now drafting Chap 7 so fingers crossed it won't take too long

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