Fanfiction: Me and Mr. Jones (Chapter 6)

[lady_sb]

A/N: Wow its midway and judging by all the feedback everyone has given me, I am so flattered that everyone is liking how this story is panning out

Comments

[aquila_star]

omg squee!

I just checked this morning, then I checked again and here it is! yay. *scurries off*

[aquila_star]

yes, amazing. oh, you had me on the edge of my seat...well, couch, the whole time.

and the stark emotions from Ianto at the end, and Jack's desperation to talk to him. wonderful.

another amazing chapter.

[lady_sb]

I am happy you liked the structure :) and thanks for the comment.

[szm]

You are a terrible terrible tease and I love you for it. I really thought you were going to sit them at the same table, then they just kept missing each other by seconds...

Lovely chapter

[lady_sb]

Lol sorry for being a tease but I did like the idea of being "so close and yet so far" for this chapter.

Glad you liked the chapter :)

[greenwyvern]

Wow. You are brilliant. All the near misses almost reads like a classic comedy of errors except for the tension that runs through it, ratcheting up higher and higher with each time they don't meet/see each other. Then when they finally do....ouch! This was really good. And why do I suspect that something is physically/medically wrong with Lisa and she's not telling Ianto?

I'm REALLY looking forward to the next installment. :-)

GW

[lady_sb]

*blushes* Thanks. And yes that was what I was going for, that old style near misses.

Will try not to make you wait so long for the next part :)

[lady_sb]

Glad you like the story *hands you tissue and cookie*. Am working on Chap 7 now, hopefully the first draft turns out better and no need for rewrites =_=;;

[ldycat1170]

That was put together so well. Another lovely chapter.

[lady_sb]

Glad you like how its structured ^_^ thanks!