THE SLOT MACHINE By: Lady Michaelis Pairing: Adam Lambert/Kris Allen Rating: R - NC17 Warnings: Sexual situations, language Genre: Romance /Erotica Summary: Adam gets the strangest unbirthday present ever. Disclaimers: I own nothing-yet.
I absolutely adored this, my dear! Very cute, funny, and snarky. Could totally see Kris playing the game with Adam.
Just one small suggestion, when you said this: "Everyone agreed that it might actually keep you busy and celibate for awhile."
Just remember that celibate means living a life with NO sex of any kind involved. I'm thinking you were going for something like monogamous, which means singly involved with just one person, if the ultimate goal was to get Adam laid. It confused me, so I just thought I'd mention it. Don't hate me pretty please! You know I love your writing. Unless I need to be corrected and just totally don't get what you meant with that line. If so, then clarify for me. Thanks bb! ;D Really loved this!
I did meant it to come out that way; I know it looks confusing. :) Tommy's hinting that Adam might not be able to figure out the machine works, hence the mention of celibacy.
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Just one small suggestion, when you said this: "Everyone agreed that it might actually keep you busy and celibate for awhile."
Just remember that celibate means living a life with NO sex of any kind involved. I'm thinking you were going for something like monogamous, which means singly involved with just one person, if the ultimate goal was to get Adam laid. It confused me, so I just thought I'd mention it. Don't hate me pretty please! You know I love your writing. Unless I need to be corrected and just totally don't get what you meant with that line. If so, then clarify for me. Thanks bb! ;D Really loved this!
Hugs! xoxoxo
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Still loved this though! It was delish!
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