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lady_dae

Must Be Dreaming (Details) Part 5

Mar 22, 2010 02:41

Title: Must Be Dreaming (Details)
Fandom: RPF
Pairing: Pinto
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Don't own 'em, just love 'em
Warnings: smexy times, long-term angst, gratuitous use of ellipses and other naughty grammar
Summary: Part 5 of 11. Zach has a crush on Chris but Chris really doesn't want to know. A lot of angst, UST and crappy decision making follows ( Read more... )

series, angst, fanfic, sex, pinto, details, slash, rpf

Comments 17

tinocka March 21 2010, 16:30:45 UTC

This was hot and desperate and kind of sad, yet hopeful.

/“I’m yours,” whispers Zach. “All yours, always yours, undeniably yours.”/ This may be the most beautiful confession ever.

And you updated so quickly! I hope the next chapter will be here, soon, too :)

lady_dae March 22 2010, 02:59:56 UTC

heehee! Yeah I'm kind of very happy with how that line turned out :D
I always knew that this chapter would be quick and easy to write - sexy Pinto times, c'mon! I'm hoping I can get the next chapter up in under a week, fingers crossed.

kianspo March 21 2010, 17:54:18 UTC

Beautiful scene. <333
Though somehow I'm afraid it won't be so easy for Chris to accept when he wakes up... O.o

lady_dae March 22 2010, 03:01:55 UTC

Thanks :D
I'm not sure how Chris is going to react in the morning yet but this chapter does mark the shift into the next stage of the story.

molleo March 22 2010, 11:18:25 UTC

ARRGH! I MUST KNOW IF THIS ICON IS REAL OR PHOTOSHOPPED! PLEASE! I've been dying to know since I saw the photo at the Pinto Party on Fri., but no one would tell me. Do you know? (Sorry for being shouty, I'm just a bit desperate)

kianspo March 22 2010, 12:16:53 UTC

I'm so sorry, I can't help you. D: I thought it was photoshopped, because, you know, too good to be true and all that, but then I saw the photo, same as you have, and now I just don't know! It's okay to be shouty, I just wish I knew myself. D:

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lady_dae March 22 2010, 03:02:41 UTC

Aww, thank you! They are both in a difficult place :P

BB YOU ROCK storyshark2005 March 21 2010, 20:22:19 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH TWO CHAPTER OF THIS MAKES ME SOOO HAPPY!!!!

this was wonderful! though i also wonder how chris will react in the morning, if he's going to freak out a bit. how he really feels about zach. we all know where zach is but chris? it may be a bit trickier. oh, and zach's last line was...SO GORGEOUS. lovely.

wonderful as always.

Re: BB YOU ROCK lady_dae March 22 2010, 03:08:00 UTC

REALLY?! WOW AND THERE WAS ME GOING THROUGH LIFE UNKNOWING!!!! :DDD
Yep, Zach and Chris are in for a big ride and while that last line of Zach's sums up where he's at emotionally, Chris is still a bit of a mystery (even to me if I'm honest) :P

azteckid March 21 2010, 22:14:16 UTC

OH chrissy. if you break zachary's heart in the morning, i'm gonna wanna punch you in the face...

ANYWAY. this chap was lovely and kinda heartbreaking. can't wait for the next part.

lady_dae March 22 2010, 03:12:47 UTC

Hopefully Chris won't be too much of a douche in the morning :P
Thanks for commenting!