Mwahaha!!! The first act is done!

Dec 28, 2006 15:47


After months of laziness. the first act of teatro de gotico is complete. The first act is sort of cliche-ish but i think the second act will make up for it.

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derevko_child December 29 2006, 04:17:19 UTC
where can we read it?

Your layout's okay, pero mas maganda siguro kung naka horizontal yng mga ads...

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first act edensgray December 29 2006, 14:22:23 UTC
what happened to the post i read about the man scouring through the forest, running for his life?

i was really pressed into that as an introduction because it kept me wondering and wanting to know read more about his history - why was he running? who was he running from? it left me questioning...

side note: Is Quixote Arc the name of the first act? Will the second act have another title?

I am uncertain the path you will take with your story but beginning your story with this "cliche" ideal truly lost my interest.

Of course, this is solely the opinion of one reader.
...i will wait to read your second act

what act was your previous post???

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