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l3petitemort

Solve for X

Jul 30, 2009 19:30

Title: Solve for X
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Draco/Bellatrix, Narcissa
Wordcount: ~7500
Summary: The seduction of Draco Malfoy.
Warnings: Angst. Incest. Mild knifeplay. A bit of nongraphic violence & blood. A potentially underage Draco (he's 16ish here.)

( Solve for X )

warning: cross-gen, character: bellatrix (black) lestrange, rating: nc-17, pairing: draco/bellatrix, character: draco malfoy, warning: knifeplay, warning: underage, fic, character: narcissa (black) malfoy, fandom: harry potter, category: het

Comments 24

prongsxwormtail July 31 2009, 01:17:07 UTC

While that highly disturbed me on MANY levels...it was well written.

However...I might have to pour bleach on my brain to save it...

l3petitemort July 31 2009, 02:21:46 UTC

haha, thanks.

you've always got to have a bottle of brain bleach when bella is around, you know ;) she's unpredictable, that one.

prongsxwormtail July 31 2009, 02:34:24 UTC

Oh but she is...

Haha. I can't write Slytherins for SHIT. Not really.

All my muses, minus Orion, are Gryffindors...

All the canon ones anyway. Haha. Orion is an ass...just so you know

prongsxwormtail July 31 2009, 19:03:34 UTC

Also...Remus/Bill is teh sex...you should read it...=D

You...half inspired me...but then my injuring myself all the time inspired me more...-Nods- I meant it to be a drabble at first...but then I realized it could not be...

lucianwolf July 31 2009, 01:26:04 UTC

ohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgod

sahsdfldfvksdajld;alsdfj.

Fuck. That was HOT. And visceral. And desperate and hopeless and dear god yes!

I'm so glad I found your journal. afaslkaf!!!

l3petitemort July 31 2009, 02:23:27 UTC

*blush*

thank you so much.

i am loving these two more and more all the time. i don't have much experience with writing dark things, so it's very encouraging to hear that i'm having some sort of success, haha. i'm certainly having fun.

and you are very, very kind. <3

lucianwolf July 31 2009, 02:26:00 UTC

I absolutely adore dark!fic. You're doing a wonderful job. :)

l3petitemort July 31 2009, 11:38:40 UTC

thank you, again.

out of curiosity, do you find my draco believable? ha... i have a hard time with him, figuring him out, and for me he's much harder than bella.

Thread 6

lovesittxx August 3 2009, 04:12:49 UTC

Oh darling, you don't know how happy I am to have found your journal. I've found it quite impossible to find any Dracotrix fics, let alone GREAT ones.

I've found myself completely obsessed over this pairing after the infamous kiss scene in HBP. I actually started my own series of disturbingly smutty one-shots of this pair over on FF.net.

But anyways, I've been rather entranced by your writing since I read The Way Strange Things are Beautiful, and I figured I better comment. 'Tis so hard to find fellow Dracotrix shippers! :D

I would really love to go into great detail about the bits I particulary found enjoyable from this story, but I'm afraid I have made this comment too long already. But just know I loved it!

xxx

l3petitemort August 3 2009, 19:52:23 UTC

awww, thank you.

dracotrix makes me laugh, haha... it sounds like a breakfast cereal! but yes, i quite agree... there's a sad lack of the creepy deliciousness that is these two floating around in fandom, so i'm happy we've got each other. *hugs*

ha. show me what you've written!

lovesittxx August 4 2009, 01:54:23 UTC

Haha, you know, it does sound like a cereal. A totally delicious one that you can't help having more than a handful of servings of. :D

Cheers to finding eachother! ;)

And here's what I've written so far:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5257673/1/The_Sin_That_is_Lust

l3petitemort August 4 2009, 20:18:34 UTC

thanks for the link. your writing is very lush and sensual. <3

a_newheart4xmas August 4 2009, 22:22:56 UTC

Very well done, love!
I enjoyed it because it was written well and in character. The inner turmoil with Draco and with Narcissa. Narcissa coming to realize she had fucked everything up by marrying Lucius. How Bellatrix is completely insane; which we all love to devourer. Mmm, yes, Bellatrix is deliciously sinful.

*applaud* Good job! I feel now that gaps are now filled that were missing between the 5th and 6th book. Thank you!!

l3petitemort August 10 2009, 19:04:40 UTC

thank you so much <3

i really struggled with draco. i always do. it's very encouraging to hear that he's IC!

chairs August 5 2009, 01:50:53 UTC

God, that was magnificent and terrible. So gloriously fucked up and well-written, well-characterized. I loved your Narcissa in this. And it's nice to see (relatively)Sane!Bella making an appearance in a work of fanfic; she so rarely does. Thank you for this.

l3petitemort August 10 2009, 19:08:18 UTC

thank you very much <3

i really felt for narcissa, actually, ha, in all of her powerlessness... trying so hard to do right by her son, not being sure which is the lesser of two evils.

and yes. i never really see bella as completely insane. she's unpredictable and cruel -- and probably a little loopy -- but i always think she has a fairly sane (if discomfiting) purpose.